|Reviews for Pokémon Friend|
| SMILEH123 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
qui a été génial
| dragonsavior chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
This is a very great story and can't wait too read more when written!
| in versailles chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Its lovely, dear. x3 I'm a sucker for Ash/OC, if it begins to go that way. Misty and Ash pairings are hated and May and Ash are almost as much. But anyway...just a few things I might want to point out.
in the parts at the beginning, where it is italicized, the words in quotes, such as "i", "aMI", etc, only need to use the *'* mark.
In the line, She gestured at a large oak, a few hundred metres away, unless you meant to spell meters the way you did, you had a small spelling error.
'Amy watched them, smiling for a moment as she watched her playful partners, then broke into a trot.' For this, you don't need to repeat watched. Maybe rephrase it next time to say something to the effect of: 'Ami smiled for a moment, watching her playful partners, before breaking into a trot.'
That's the only things I noticed. x3 But I loved it..very much. I can't wait for an update. glomps Ash
| Fk306 chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
this is great please update soon