Reviews for The Bet
betweenthetwo chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Brilliant, loved it.

Subtle, funny, clever.

Well done,

Holly Mariano
Natsuyori chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
bloody excellent update sooN!
JoJo chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Ah! You've left this story wide open for you to write what happens in the next three weeks! There is no way you can leave this at a one-shot. Besides, Snape didn't even do what he was supposed to. Hermione won't let him get away with that, will she? Pretty please add more to the story?
Cyranothe2nd chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
I have read everything you write and I love it, love it, love it. This story is so apropos of both charecters. I love the little bit about waiting for fatigue from hand raising...just like Snape.

I will add you to my author alerts and await your next chapter to the marriage law fic with bated breath.

Yours, Cyrano
kiss-of-cuteness chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Loved the story/chapteR? it was great as a stand alone and will be great as a story.. update soon!
Winter Solstice1 chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Wonderful - really very amusing. I laughed out loud at the line 'none, you hag', which is very unusual for me, as it was absolutely priceless.

The stark contrast between Hermione's actual humility and what she suffers for it and Snape's arrogance and attitude of I-can't-possibly-be-wrong-and-I-won't-even-admit-it-when-I-am is really very interesting indeed. I presume that you've intended this story to be a one shot but it has so much potential should you think of expanding it further. The man needs to be taught a proper lesson, and I would be inclined to think that Hermione would be one to 'give it to him', if you'll excuse the pun!

Thank you for another excellent read!
Lywinis chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Oh, this is brilliant! You were pretty much in character with both of them, and this was extremely well written. Been a fan of a lot of your work for some time, and this is just another example. Thanks for brightening my day with this! *hands out Snape plushies and butterbeer all around* Keep it up!

Pathatlon chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Wonderful! Truly funny! Great plot!
Wile chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
That was fun! Thanks for this lovely story.
magicmistress071370 chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
I have to say, that this story is by far one of the funniest I have read in some time. I would love it if you were to continue with it. It would be nice to see if Snape can bring himself to say that she is the best potions student that he has ever had. Great job.
RadicallyRandom7 chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Muhahaha! AWESOME!
Verity Brown chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
Oh, that was fun! :) Good job of keeping Snape in character, too.
cecelle chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
That was great. I loved that she was able to show him up in the end after all - 'outdated source materials', LOL! Both of them are true to their characters. Good job!
venomequeen-83 chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
LMAO!Omg, this was absolutly hillarious! You deserve an award...I Venomequeen_83 Do here by bequith Vanityfair with the first ever award for excelent use of originality, hummor and writing seen in a first chapeter alone. * Hands you a big fancy paper with all said above and hands a gold and green ribbon with a silver medal* Three chears for Vainityfair hiphip horray! hiphip horray! hiphip horray!
tumblrina chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
*snorts* Funny story.
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