|Reviews for Dancing in the Dark|
| Holli chapter 1 . 2/5/2005
I might have reviewed this before so if any of this sounds familiar, that's why.
Anyway, this is a good story that shows how those left behind might feel and carry on. I think that you handled the interaction between Natalie and Jean Paul in a very realistic and true way. I wasn't sure who I felt worse for but you made me feel for both of them. Overall, I really enjoyed this story.
There were a couple grammatical mistakes that you might want to take care of - it's a little picky, I know, but it'd be a shame if someone didn't finish this one because of some typos.
Keep up the good work!
| hikarisailorcat chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
that was a really good story! i loved it!it was so sad!
keep up the good work!