|Reviews for The Forgotten Game|
| Minako-chan4 chapter 12 . 2/23
Yey! I remember once I had started to read your fic, and then you never updated. i'm glad you have now and we can finish reading it. Can't wait for the end, hurry!
| katlykat chapter 12 . 2/9
This is my FAVORITE story from you. I just reread it all to remember what happened before the new chapter and was nicely reminded why I was waiting for an update. (I'm only going to review this chapter though because I'm sure I've already reviewed the rest before) Backtracking slightly, I do love your interpretation of little Akane. She really made the flashback/nightmare real for me. I was a little sad that Akane fell for the fake Ranma. After first seeing him, I completely understand her reaction in trusting it was him. After that, and they started to fight, I could tell that wasn't an accurate depiction of Ranma. But, from what I know about your writing and how you characterize, I knew that couldn't be Ranma. You were right to make Akane fall for it, just reading it made me sad for her, you know? I'm not sure about how this vow stuff is going to affect the story though, it just seems like an unnecessary curve ball.
| AliaBobbwa chapter 12 . 2/3
I can't believe I've been reading this story for this many years...lol
| sodalicious chapter 12 . 1/18
Excuse me while i throw the biggest hissy fit at this website for the millionth time tonight. I can't believe it even failed to alert me of updates to this story. I want to hit something... hard.
okay. (deep breaths)
bless you from here to kingdom come for FINALLY continuing with this fanfic. I'm a hardcore fan. I loved it back then, and i love it even more now.
I honestly can't even imagine how it will end and what will really happen to the characters. Perhaps Kasumi really is gone and you're just cruelly (deliciously) leading us readers to hope in vain. I want to know what Nabiki has up her sleeve. (I've always favored the opportunistic sister and i love stories that correctly portray her as crafty and intelligent rather than just miserly and cold-hearted.)
And i'm starting to warm up to Gabriel as you reveal more about him. but villains are always suddenly cast in a pitiable and sympathetic light once we begin learn of their background. (of course, i'm not suggesting it excuses crimes or anything of the sort.) Ah, still, I love how you bring him to life, which is difficult to do when creating one's own character in a fanfic.
Hurry and update fast before I lose countless nights of sleep from imagining wild scenarios to come!
| Mei-chan chapter 12 . 1/15
I want more! More! MOREEE!
What awesome chappie.
Dammit, I freaking fangirled when I thought Ranma kissed her and when it was Gabriel I let out a dissapointed sigh :/
Anyway, please update soon.
| Teddy's Circus chapter 12 . 1/14
Hello there! Im glad you updated! I liked so much this chapter! I want...no..I NEED to know what happens next!
See ya next time darling!
P.D: I know this might sound creepy or something, but sometimes I found Gabriel ...hot...even though he is a psico, perverted jerk.
| Lichan44 chapter 12 . 1/11
You are so welcome for what help I could give! Not that it was much because the chapter was awesome anyway! You are too hard on yourself. This is one of my favorite stories and I'm so glad to see you working on it again. That Gabriel is so infuriating! Loved watching Ranma get so mad that he smashed the mirror! Whoo! heh heh... God help Gabriel when he gets out of that attic! Can't wait to see Ranma kick his butt! And of course for Akane to get in some blows as well. Take THAT! _ As always, a great job! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| Bloody.death.cat chapter 12 . 1/10
God damn it a cliffy this is going to kill me I want yo know what happens next so please update soon and keep up all the good work you and your awesome team _
| O'Donoghue chapter 12 . 1/9
Good to see progress and tension building.
| PhoebeRhae chapter 12 . 1/9
You're writting gives me the chills! I still feel sad for Kasumi though :'( anyway, can' t wait till next update!
| pursemonger chapter 12 . 1/9
Very interesting update! When I was reading the scene with Ranma and Akane, I was thinking, wow he's meaner than usual! I really didn't get an inkling about what was happening until near the end.
I wonder how you are gonna get Akane out of her "promise".
The Ryoga scene of hiding and thinking how violent and mean Ukyo was to Akane made me laugh. Can't wait for another update.
| Ranko twin chapter 12 . 1/9
Well...Kudos to freaking Gabriel! My goodness! Before I go on my rant about Gabriel, just wanna say that I loved the rest of the chapter and the finding of Ryouga and just wondering what his nightmare will be.
Now...that lovable bastard Gabriel. Not gonna lie, I love Gabriel, probably because I love Julian but there were still moments in the book where I wanted to punch him; same goes for Gabriel. But how he tricked Akane! My freaking goodness! I don't know if I should applaud him or what because that was freaking clever! I suspected something like that was going to happen but I wasn't sure until "Ranma" started to question Akane. "Maybe?" Yeah...But probably my favorite part was when it cut to Ranma. You did a very good job with that; I could really feel his anger and it even scared me! His anger, regret, desperation; it was all beautifully done.
Another wonderful chapter!
| Luna12 chapter 12 . 1/8
I love Ukyo cursing like that. It was a great reaction. Ryoga’s commentary comparing Ukyo to Akane was fun. I also loved how Ryoga really understands Akane’s character and motivations. I’ve said this before, but you write Ryoga amazingly well and in-character.
Copy-Ranma's dialogue was so typical Ranma-insert-foot-in-mouth that it was easy to believe it really was Ranma.
I think where you ended it in worked great. It gives just enough suspense for readers to look forward to the next chapter, with also finishing up the Gabriel-tricking-Akane section. The chapter has good definition, if that makes sense.
| Luna12 chapter 3 . 1/3
Your descriptions are wonderful. Each character reacts perfectly and Nabiki's line of "law suit" was so in-character and funny.
| pursemonger chapter 11 . 9/19/2013
Great job on this story. It's really engaging and original for a Ranma fanfic, even if it is an adaptation of a book series. I really hope you update this, I really want to see where you take it.
BTW, I think you handled Nabiki's plot well. Other than Shampoo, she is one character I really dislike. I'm confused on why authors seem to treat her with kid gloves and always gloss over all of her actions in the manga/anime series.