wow... i am in awe

I'm only halfway though savoring this but this is so beautiful, vulnerable andhonest. you're so amazing

wow this was beautiful man rukia you really we're blind.

raw and poetic... i love it...

Ahh, this's so deep and this problem would likely occur if they became couple. You write it so well and I love it so thank you for good read and see ya :)

:'( so cute and so sad

Kind of verbose. You know, when people interact, I think it's a natural reaction to want and even expect dialog. You paint a lot of imagery, but it's all two-dimensional because the people don't feel real. To me it's like you're describing a 'thing,' as it has no voice; worse than watching a television with no sound. jsm

Beautiful.

Love this!

Wow, really deep and intimate. You put the details where they were approprate and put the one-liners right in between the parts that would produce the mist impact on the reader. Very nice indeed.

Aww this was so cute! I loved it (:

Beautiful. Really enjoyed it. I could see and feel the characters come alive. Great job! It would have been better though if there were dialogues. :)

omg. im almost crying{sob sob} so emotional

Great story, I liked it!

Wow! Simply wow! I have not come across such an eloquently and impeccable writing style in such a long time. You, my good friend, are a master wordsmith. I loved this story, I really did. Your imagery was amazing, and I loved how you could tell a whole story with almost no dialogue. This story was incredibly well done. I love how you portray the emotions the characters go through, and everyone was in-character. The stubbornness of Rukia to deny her feelings into the end was well conveyed, and Ichigo's own stubbornness of not giving up was excellent, too. Wow, I am at a loss for words to describe how awesome this story is and how brilliant and talented you are as a writer. Thank you so much for this IchiRuki fanfic, for I have thoroughly enjoyed it! :D