Reviews for Her Blindness |
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massiecure chapter 1 . 3/20/2022 wow... i am in awe |
massiecure chapter 1 . 3/20/2022 I'm only halfway though savoring this but this is so beautiful, vulnerable andhonest. you're so amazing |
Kris Senju chapter 1 . 8/22/2016 wow this was beautiful man rukia you really we're blind. |
hopelessromantic chapter 1 . 5/9/2016 raw and poetic... i love it... |
Lenora Jime chapter 1 . 3/26/2015 Ahh, this's so deep and this problem would likely occur if they became couple. You write it so well and I love it so thank you for good read and see ya :) |
write-notright chapter 1 . 2/15/2015 :'( so cute and so sad |
Not bad chapter 1 . 12/31/2014 Kind of verbose. You know, when people interact, I think it's a natural reaction to want and even expect dialog. You paint a lot of imagery, but it's all two-dimensional because the people don't feel real. To me it's like you're describing a 'thing,' as it has no voice; worse than watching a television with no sound. jsm |
curio cherry chapter 1 . 2/26/2014 Beautiful. |
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 1/17/2014 Love this! |
JustAnotherHuman chapter 1 . 7/11/2013 Wow, really deep and intimate. You put the details where they were approprate and put the one-liners right in between the parts that would produce the mist impact on the reader. Very nice indeed. |
Be-U-tiful chapter 1 . 2/3/2013 Aww this was so cute! I loved it (: |
mishiroo chapter 1 . 1/29/2013 Beautiful. Really enjoyed it. I could see and feel the characters come alive. Great job! It would have been better though if there were dialogues. :) |
Screaming Rose chapter 1 . 12/25/2012 omg. im almost crying{sob sob} so emotional |
jessi chapter 1 . 12/4/2012 Great story, I liked it! |
Mistress Charon chapter 1 . 11/22/2012 Wow! Simply wow! I have not come across such an eloquently and impeccable writing style in such a long time. You, my good friend, are a master wordsmith. I loved this story, I really did. Your imagery was amazing, and I loved how you could tell a whole story with almost no dialogue. This story was incredibly well done. I love how you portray the emotions the characters go through, and everyone was in-character. The stubbornness of Rukia to deny her feelings into the end was well conveyed, and Ichigo's own stubbornness of not giving up was excellent, too. Wow, I am at a loss for words to describe how awesome this story is and how brilliant and talented you are as a writer. Thank you so much for this IchiRuki fanfic, for I have thoroughly enjoyed it! :D |