Reviews for Providence
wizmage chapter 15 . 7/16/2010
That line about the fortune cookie was straight from Charmed. I can't wait to see what else you can come up with.
Stina Whatever chapter 15 . 5/15/2010
NoAlias chapter 15 . 8/19/2007
I just finished this story as well. I loved what you did with the Resistance and the relationship between Chris and Bianca. It was all very dark, and that's the way that I like it. Very well written and very well thought out. The character of Les was also made interesting and I came to really care about what happened in the story. I did think it was kind of stupid that they didn't kill Wyatt then and there, if it was so harsh, I think that they should have but overall I like what you did with things. I can't wait to read the next one but unfortunately I should probably go to bed as I have work tomorrow. I think that your writing has improved since No Fate and it makes me very optimistic about the next story.
Angelayzn chapter 15 . 8/11/2007
great story i loved the whole 3 stories, they were so good. write more...
Stoneage Woman chapter 15 . 10/13/2006
Oh. My. God. I swear you're one of THE best writers in this fandom. Your "No fate" triology was friggin' AWESOME! I love all your descriptions of the Resistance and the telepaths and the battle plans and how you slip in jargon terms like 'scout teams' and 'status reports.' They make the story so...realistic, somehow. Like, if the Charmed ones actually did exist, if our world actually got into a war in 2027, THIS is exactly how it couled happen. Love your portrayal of Chris as well. And Bianca. I love the moments of humor, too. Most of them were very welcome.

You are going on my faves, and so's this story. And, if you write something, I will definitely review it, rest assured. Very well done.
Ixelfaye chapter 15 . 8/27/2006
You are so awesome, I loved this story so much its def. going on my favorites and I'm going to go check out some more of your stuff. This story so made my day!
Stylin'Fire chapter 15 . 7/21/2006
I really liked your story, and even though you made it about a year ago, I think you should make a sequle.

You could make everyone not like Bionca and that puts a strain on Chris and Bionca's relationship. Then something bad happens to Chris or Bionca and then BOOM! DRAMA! Just an idea, I hope you take my advice and make a sequle becasue I know for a fact that A LOT of people would read it. Good story!
Sensue chapter 15 . 3/5/2006
Again, I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier.

What I loved most about "Providence" is that Chris and Bianca didn't instantly fall in love. As much as I love the idea of "love at first sight" (I'm a romantic at heart), I loved the fact that they could get past their obvious differences and misconceptions in order to find each other. Sheila's character, although she wasn't around as much as Les, was perfectly written. I really love Les as well. (I didn't like him much in the show, but you've made me change my mind).

The part that really got to me was after Sheila's death, the speech, the emotions-or lack thereof-behind Chris's words and the ultimate decision to assassinate Wyatt. It was chilling.

I loved Daryl's family-his children's roles in the Resistance. (And the fact that they are called the "Resistance" as John Connor's army against the machines.)

As the fact that even though their lives were absolutely horrible, that everyone lived in poverty, danger, and fear everyday of their lives; they were all still a family. (As Elise stated).

It was a great prequel to "No Fate".

My only disappointment was the lack of obvious lead in to "Chris Crossed". I really wanted to explore how Chris and Bianca came up with the plans to send him back to the past. What made him think of it? You stated that Daryl tried to talk him out of it, why? I want details! Why didn't Bianca go with him? Why didn't Les or Zack? Etc. Perhaps there's a way of bribing you to write it? PLEASE! I'm begging now.
mjp3 chapter 15 . 8/8/2005
That was, as usual, a fantastic story. It was full of suspense and twists throughout, but there was one thing thats bugging me. Why wouldnt Les or Bianca kill Wyatt when they could easily have done so when Wyatt was weak? It would mean the end of the war. They would have saved hundreds of lives and Bianca would have had her revenge. I know you couldnt have killed Wyatt off, for obvious reasons, but I thought it was a little out of character. Theyre in the middle of a war zone with all their friends and family dying because of Wyatt and when they get him handed to them on a silver platter, they just leave?

I still love your story, but that little part of it was slightly annoying me. I really like the way you write. Its very descriptive and you capture everyones emotions perfectly. I hope you write a fifth story in your No Fate universe. Maybe a sequel to this one? You could continue where this one left off and follow Chris and Biancas relationship, with all the problems they may have and write how they came up with the time travel plan. Just an idea.

Please keep writing! I love your work and I hope you find the time and inspiration to write something new very soon!
Enrika721 chapter 15 . 7/1/2005
Hey Jenna! I hope you still remember me, Fanastygirl721, because I know I haven't been reading/revieiwing lately. I am really sorry about that. But I was really sick, fell behind in school work, then once school ended I haven't really been home, and so had no time for FanFic! I want you to know that I am still a fan of your fics (and proboly will always be) and apologize for not reviewing. I really loved this story, kinda sad that it's over, but it was a good tale of how Chris and Bianca hooked up, cause it wsaa never really explained in the show. I really like the part where Les tells Chris to hook up with Bianca, that was funny! Aside from that, I just want to let you know that you are a really good writer and I love your stuff. Keep up the good work. I will definately read the revised Redudant when it is posted. Once agian, I am really sorry, hope that you forgive me, and wish you the best of luck in your writing endeavors,cause you're really good!

Your fan,

Katrina (fanastygirl721)
Sparkling Cherries chapter 15 . 6/29/2005
congrats on a job well done! loved it all! :)
Charmed Ravenclaw chapter 15 . 6/28/2005
Nice conclusion. As it is a prequel, I don't really think you could have made it more of an action sort of story. And since it is mainly a romance fic, the amount of action and suspense kind of suited it. Can you email me when each chapter is re-written? I have an account at this website under this name; it's just that I couldn't be bothered logging in right now.
ilovedrew88 chapter 15 . 6/27/2005
I'm so happy that Chris and Bianca finally got together. Chris is so sweet. I thought it was so funny that Les had a bet going on as to when Biana and Chris would finally get together. It was a great story. I can't wait for more of your stories.
chattypandagurl chapter 15 . 6/26/2005
Great end to a great story! And at last they KISS! I've been waiting fifteen chapters for that moment! Love your writing, and the "No Fate" universe you've created...I'm looking forward to the rewrite of "Redundant"! Congrats on writing a story that has such accurate characterization and a great, twisting plot-just the way I like it.
Icantthinkofafnick chapter 15 . 6/26/2005
I LOVED Les mind game to force him to talk to Bianca... it was awesome!

"“Did you give them a reason to?” Chris countered. “Trust is a precious commodity. Once you lose it, you have to earn it back.”

Hearing the truth in his words, she flinched, feeling hurt and, acting instinctively, lashed out and retaliated, “Where’d you get that from? A fortune cookie?”" Girl you ARE a genius!

NO don't tell me is over... I am going to cry... i swear I will.

"IcantthinkofaFnick: As usual? I’m not sure about that..." ok, ok... as ALWAYS... I was just trying to pretend I wasn't I completely drooling fan... but you got me...

Oh no... till fall? Please update as soon as you can.. and send this story to a publisher...look..."The Wyatt Halliwell" says that universal accepted her story for a movie... which is great... but not to be mean, but in my opinion you are far better writter, so you honestly deserve to be the next Tolkien!

Come back soon

We'll miss you

Great ending.

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