Excellent story. Quite an indepth look at the one known as Atomsk.

very good please continue

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I have no qualms with anything you've written. Please continue.

Great!Not too emotional not too cruel.I Loved it! RIGHT MORE!Oh Im supposed to be a critique Right?Well cut down the to emotions 50% increase comedy to 50%.Oh and add more adventure and is this going to have fight scenes!But no seriously I liked it

It was a great fic though I thought Atomsk would of called her Raharu instead. Besides that one inacuracy I liked your fic.