|Reviews for Dead Worlds|
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/24/2012
Man, you should really finish this. 1440 battlemechs?
| Rose1948 chapter 2 . 8/27/2007
Any chance of this being continued? Any story having to do with the discovery of 1,440 'Mechs just BEGS for more.
| Olaf74 chapter 2 . 7/7/2006
Its great. please continue it.
| geminidude88 chapter 2 . 6/16/2005
this is good stuff-any more of it?
| Texray1 chapter 2 . 5/17/2005
Don't keep us waiting! Any story where someone finds 1440 mechs needs to be finished!
| Maddog3060 chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Well, it's certainly an interesting concept. I especially like the independent WarShip idea. ;) The setting is also pretty good.
Just... The writing seems like it could use some polish. Perhaps describe some of the scenes better, or work on transitioning better from scene to scene. Sometimes, I get the feeling like I'm jumping too far.
Other than that, it's interesting. I am certainly looking forward to see what happens next. ;)
| Texray1 chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Very nice start. Star League caches are always fun.
| Terion chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Very interesting. Can't wait to see what you do with this next.