|Reviews for The Dawn is Coming|
| LunaBlack666 chapter 24 . 7/29/2006
couldn't the pairings be like Dawn/Spike, Mya/draco and every one else you mentioned i am more of a spike dawn fan than a draco dawn fan but it is your decsion and you have made good descions so far so you should know best and one more thing keep up the good work
| Avatar1990 chapter 24 . 6/11/2006
sorry for not reviewing to all of the chapters but i didn't want to take more time to review than to read so i read all the ones i hadn't and then reviewed to this one and i'm glad to say that your story is going really good and i hope you keep going have fun with thisand it will go on for a while
| SEAGUL chapter 24 . 5/2/2006
Didn't you write the Ron was gay, why are you planning on having him date Luna?
| bloodytear89 chapter 24 . 3/25/2006
pretty good, there are a few spelling mistakes but oh well. Wow you haven't updated in awhile hope you will soon :)
| BSGirl chapter 24 . 2/21/2006
| Sin3ya chapter 2 . 1/28/2006
now i understand what you meant by 'Hermione Bashing' i kinda like her characterness, but nonetheless your first coupla chappys are good. Kudos!
| Lillian Resolve chapter 24 . 9/11/2005
ok the writing could be helped get a beta they rock but the storyline is good hence the reason im gonna kepp readin g make the chaps longer though or at least try i know how hard it is to try and please a bun ch of evil reveiwers so no preesure i like it it just needs work k
| Sarah Lila F chapter 4 . 9/11/2005
Could do with an edit.
But good over all idea. Always like Ginny as a possible vampire slayer. :)
| Sarah Lila F chapter 3 . 9/11/2005
There - I think you meant 'they're' with an apostrophe.
Because it is a shortening of they are.
I did not like Dawn saying the Faith line to Draco. Don't worry, it's just something that I pick up on a lot. Just a personal preference. No need to do anything about it.
I like the story though. Dawn's the same age as the students which could lead to some humour. :)
| Sarah Lila F chapter 2 . 9/11/2005
No. Now - What does that mean?
I like the idea of Dawn teaching. Maybe she could give Hemoine a detention for questioning her clothes?
| Sarah Lila F chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
In your summary you may want to check your spelling.
It's spelled against, not agaenst. :) Hope that helps.
| 1 in hall of freaks chapter 24 . 9/2/2005
i love it plez make longer chappies i like those pairings i def want ginny/conner
| Napolean chapter 23 . 8/31/2005
AH! There's no more? There's GOT to be more! This story is going on my alert list now... and you had better update soon! Please?
Mk, I didn't say anything about it before, but... Ice Ice Baby? Are you SERIOUS? Haha, that's pretty funny. I always pictured him to be a rocker, the vampires, slayers, watchers, and daemons too... oddness.
Alrighty, update ASAP!
| Napolean chapter 17 . 8/31/2005
Conner and Ginny! Omg! Interesting! .
| Napolean chapter 16 . 8/31/2005
Again, this story just gets better and better!