Reviews for The Dawn is Coming
LunaBlack666 chapter 24 . 7/29/2006
couldn't the pairings be like Dawn/Spike, Mya/draco and every one else you mentioned i am more of a spike dawn fan than a draco dawn fan but it is your decsion and you have made good descions so far so you should know best and one more thing keep up the good work
Avatar1990 chapter 24 . 6/11/2006
sorry for not reviewing to all of the chapters but i didn't want to take more time to review than to read so i read all the ones i hadn't and then reviewed to this one and i'm glad to say that your story is going really good and i hope you keep going have fun with thisand it will go on for a while
SEAGUL chapter 24 . 5/2/2006
Didn't you write the Ron was gay, why are you planning on having him date Luna?
bloodytear89 chapter 24 . 3/25/2006
pretty good, there are a few spelling mistakes but oh well. Wow you haven't updated in awhile hope you will soon :)
BSGirl chapter 24 . 2/21/2006
Update Please!
Sin3ya chapter 2 . 1/28/2006
now i understand what you meant by 'Hermione Bashing' i kinda like her characterness, but nonetheless your first coupla chappys are good. Kudos!
Lillian Resolve chapter 24 . 9/11/2005
ok the writing could be helped get a beta they rock but the storyline is good hence the reason im gonna kepp readin g make the chaps longer though or at least try i know how hard it is to try and please a bun ch of evil reveiwers so no preesure i like it it just needs work k
Sarah Lila F chapter 4 . 9/11/2005
Could do with an edit.

But good over all idea. Always like Ginny as a possible vampire slayer. :)
Sarah Lila F chapter 3 . 9/11/2005
There - I think you meant 'they're' with an apostrophe.

Because it is a shortening of they are.

I did not like Dawn saying the Faith line to Draco. Don't worry, it's just something that I pick up on a lot. Just a personal preference. No need to do anything about it.

I like the story though. Dawn's the same age as the students which could lead to some humour. :)
Sarah Lila F chapter 2 . 9/11/2005
No. Now - What does that mean?

"Calls dismissed."

Class dismissed?

I like the idea of Dawn teaching. Maybe she could give Hemoine a detention for questioning her clothes?
Sarah Lila F chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
In your summary you may want to check your spelling.

It's spelled against, not agaenst. :) Hope that helps.
1 in hall of freaks chapter 24 . 9/2/2005
i love it plez make longer chappies i like those pairings i def want ginny/conner
Napolean chapter 23 . 8/31/2005
AH! There's no more? There's GOT to be more! This story is going on my alert list now... and you had better update soon! Please?

Mk, I didn't say anything about it before, but... Ice Ice Baby? Are you SERIOUS? Haha, that's pretty funny. I always pictured him to be a rocker, the vampires, slayers, watchers, and daemons too... oddness.

Alrighty, update ASAP!
Napolean chapter 17 . 8/31/2005
Conner and Ginny! Omg! Interesting! .
Napolean chapter 16 . 8/31/2005
Again, this story just gets better and better!
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