|Reviews for Hinata's Story
| jenuzumaki chapter 5 . 10/15/2019
I love the tsundere Hinata when enemies threaten her Naruto-kun. And then combine that with crazy Sakura destroying whoever those two girls are facing. To be honest, i like them teaming up and making men fear them. I wish there were a lot of stories like this. Their team is awesome.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2018
Holy Mother of Bullshit...
| SalDalia chapter 1 . 9/26/2016
For the love of kami. Why are the best stories not finished?! Your summery made me smile because it is almost a universal truth.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
Please update this!
| Clearmens chapter 9 . 1/8/2016
That is a very intense and protracted naruto hinata sotry but I like it quite a lot with the detail and close ups you weave into it.
You have made a fun out of me.
I am almost disappointed the duel is posted yet but who am I to talked.
I will catch the next episode when it is in.
Happy new year and more grease to your elbows.
| sultryvoice chapter 9 . 10/25/2015
You definitely need to come off hiatus and finish this story. It is too good a story for you to leave it so immaturely and unfinished. It is better than most of Hinata stories out there.
| BADfangirl18 chapter 9 . 9/9/2015
This is by far my favorite Hinata Fic, I've read it and re-read it about 50 times, and after I read it the first time and didn't favorite it I spent 3 days scouring Naruto fanfictions to find it again. The original characters are well written, and don't overpower the main characters, who are written just as well and really embodies the characters created by Kishimoto and the major plot points are well thought out and maintained, even though it's not finished and hasn't been updated in 8 years, and I'm dying for you to finish or update so I can read more, I don't think I'll ever stop loving this story, I know I will read it, and re-read it at least 100 more times and until it happens I won't stop praying that the next time I read this story it'll have been updated or be finished.
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/15/2015
Dude plz make more! You have to! Plz plz
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/8/2015
Absolutely love it. I feel that you get theses characters right down to the nitty gritty details, it is amazing to me how well that you get these characters right. It's awesome, please keep writing this story I want to see how you end this.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
That's great actually I'm trying to find a fanfic like must have described hinatas training part even
| Hinatta chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
Another long Hinata story!
I'll add this story to my Hinata Community
PM me to be staff or if you know of any others!
Look for it here: ...
| Random viewer chapter 7 . 2/24/2015
I find it funny that the whole ointment thing actually has has now happened years later after you wrote this and is now canon in The Last: Naruto the Movie. So good job calling it lol
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/12/2014
This is one of the only good fan fictions I've read and i know that you haven't worked on it in 7 years now but please start it up again! I love how Naruto's feelings for Hinata slowly build up instead of blasting out randomly. I also like how his feelings for Sakura have not been completely erased like in many fanfictions. It makes it much more realistic and true to the real story. In conclusion, please take up the story again so that I can see what happens next as well as everyone else!
| T chapter 9 . 10/5/2014
I really liked everything up to now. You should come back and finish this
| Frog chapter 2 . 8/16/2014
This is the best written I have read yet, and it is on the same maturity level as the anime, some plot might be different, but MAN does it work!