Reviews for Scenes
SHeWithNoName chapter 3 . 4/2/2008
i like it!please post more soon!Can you make it al ittle longer though?thanks
lizzielol chapter 3 . 7/18/2007
I really Like it. Not like most Sasuhina stories, but it is definately more realistic...it sucks that you discontinued it though, it was really good.

well if you ever decide to start it again, I will definately read it
TuxisGirl chapter 3 . 4/14/2007
update
lilies chapter 3 . 12/10/2005
i like it a lot! sasuke is so cold! but i love it that way! pls. update soon!
Mariagoner chapter 3 . 12/3/2005
I'm sorry you abandoned this- it's really beautifully written and extremely, albeit depressing realistic- so much more so than the Sasuke-takes-one-look-at-Hinata-and-falls-instantly-into-love fics that fill up And that sex scene in the 1st chapter... man, poor Hinata. Sasuke really WOULD be a terrible husband, wouldn't he?
ElasticBobaTurtle chapter 3 . 11/23/2005
Ooh, this is a really nicely written story. Your style is very consistent and flows well; each piece is knit together wonderfully. Beautiful characterizations; I love the cold feeling between the two of them...though it is a bit sad. :sniff: ;D

Great job; hope you update soon.
microsoftword chapter 3 . 9/10/2005
i liked how you portrayed the two main characters.

update soon please
MicrosoftWord chapter 3 . 6/18/2005
its good so far D do continue
firewindgurl chapter 3 . 5/19/2005
very interesting. i really like! _
Lacreta chapter 3 . 3/26/2005
u describe the events so well, that i can visualize it in my head w/out meaning to, esp. the part where hinata follows the light's path. but it's to short ;_; please update, you can't keep poor widdle me hanging ryt?
Lacreta chapter 2 . 3/26/2005
the order of events are dizzying, but i think that's what makes this fic special and intriguing. I love how it's going so far :)
Lacreta chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
i like how the words flow and how sasuke and hinata react, angtsy but it's so very them.

i really felt like you gave justice to their characters, even if i'm gonna need tissue pretty soon. I can visualize myself bawling in front of my computer over the next chapters. But that's a good thing right? XD
Naruto Wasian chapter 3 . 2/17/2005
I could totally see Sasuke as a neat freak! Really now! You have to updata soon! I have to know more and what exactly is going on!
Naruto Wasian chapter 2 . 2/17/2005
Sasuke won this battle the moment Hinata accepted" Are you saying NAruto liked Hinata! And she Married Sasuke! Oh MY POOR HINATA!

By the way I love this story so far!
Naruto Wasian chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
Poor Hinata! Sasuke is such a frickin horn dog! Of course she wouldn't want him like that! Gr!
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