Reviews for Dakaath: Prince of Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() damn good job on the wand, it was great keep the great work |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn, that wand sound bloody powerful...uh oh...looks like evans forgot to cover his scar...damn...harry and narcissa eh...nope i dont mind, sounds interesting...oh well...hitomi and harry is always the best...any ways keep up the good work and udpate soon V_ yours truly your dedicated reviewer skuld's sentaro3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm tempted to begin jumping up and down at the quality of the story but I will reserve that physical expression of delight for a different time. I particularly like the interaction between Narcissa and Harry in the rabe shop. Also the wand creation scene with Rodriguez I found enjoyable. While a lot of so called Independent Harry stories have a wand creation scene in them I prefer yours both for the wand maker himself as well as the actual detailing of the wand and its components. (Just love the treant) I hope you continue with theis story as I am enjoying it immensely. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() Absolutly wonderful story. I just wanted to mention one problem that I've seen. An 8 foot wingspan would not be sufficent for a creature of the size and weight of a human being. I would reconmend changing it to 16 feet or 8 meters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I loved this chapter. I would love to see Draco discover that his mom was willing to spread her legs for his enemy Potter. LOL. Should be good. PLease update soon. |
![]() ![]() Great stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() beautiful...gorgeous...amazing...update please. gracias |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good story please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() o no he forgot o great know i need to read more :( please update again when you can and thanks for the fast update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter |
![]() ![]() very interesting...but narcissa is so OLD! anywayz...please update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! Great story! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Another great chapter. I am worried about one thing though. Is someone going to steal Harry's 90 Galleon's worth of clothes? |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude your fic's totally cool cant belive i took so long to find it update soon |