Reviews for Dakaath: Prince of Darkness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is quite interesting. Multipal through out really rox. I love the way Harry is all twisted and well... a Dakaath is a very interesting creature you have created. I have one request...can I get a little DM/HP thing? Since it's various I doubt Harry will stop just cuz he ain't a female... |
![]() ![]() nice plot i love your story line very story moves kinda slow but its very good hope you will pos t more chapters soon~i really love your story~keep it up~~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Story. I really like the direction you seem to be taking this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, good story. the only thing i can say is that your story starts off with too much plot. i mean, face it, most of the people on ffn have short attention spans. but i like it. your grammar is sophisticated, unlike many of the other writers, and you have a orginal plot. i'll be waiting for the next chapter. best wishes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful story. I must say that I have truly enjoyed your work thus far and look forward to your future updates. Cheers Shugga! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another excellent chapter! I am glad you got this one out so quickly. About the comparisen, it was ment to compare quality (which is high) not style because the style is hugly different. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, keep on updating! Did you think of a pairing yet? because Fleur would be intresting... very intresting indeed,hehe *grins* |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well now that the explanations are over you can start with the fun stuff. I think that he should start his training in order to be able to make use of all his resources and to be able to control the sword but please don’t concentrate only in that because it tends to became a little boring. Instead try to mix thing a little… training, plotting expand is allies, setting up his spy network and of course put his “equivalent to the veela” in use :D Well it's only my opinion, the story is yours and you can do whatever you want. Update soon. Shadowghost |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well all in all, Harry is a lucky bastard because he has everything that he needs to kick the ministers, Voldemort and Dumbledore ass :P. Nice chapter, liked the history lesson but I think you made Grindelwald look too good but that’s Grilthauk side of the events… doesn’t mean that’s totally true. I don’t think that Dumbledore would have kill Grindelwald only because people thought that he was evil… not to mention that they were old friends so there should be a better reason to explain what happen. Can’t wait to read more… luckily chapter 4 is already posted :P |
![]() ![]() great chater keep it up |
![]() ![]() I thought this chapter was as good as the ones before. In a story you always have to have the intermediary parts. Believe me you are doing great. I also love how you update often! Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() You could bring Fleur in by making her the DADA teacher. Oh and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a wonderful story! I can not believe that I have not found it before hand. Keep up the good work. :) |
![]() ![]() Hm... Is Harry going to be able to control the sword? |