Reviews for Dakaath: Prince of Darkness |
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![]() ![]() Hm... Is Harry going to be able to control the sword? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done chapter, I will definetly be looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter! - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. You definitely captured my interest. Would you be able to add Cho, female Blaise, Alicia Spinnet, Katie Bell, Hitome and various other oc's for Harry's enjoyment. I definitely wouldn't mind reading about Harry spending some 'quality' time with these girls. But how long is it going to take before he beds any females? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I was hoping that this story would have a Harry/Fleur ship. You could always have her be a teacher or if you do not like that idea have a reunion of the participants of the triwizard tournament. I think they would be a very good ship for this story becuse of how simmilar they are. I mean all you would have to do is put themin the same room and let their powers of attraction do the work plus I like the idea of Harry stealing Bill's girlfriend. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice! |
![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() I'd rather not see this become an evil Harry story... I can see him becoming cold, dark, deadly, and the like. But evil just doesn't work. They can be amusing to start off, no doubt. I've started reading a fair number of them... but the keyword there is STARTED. I've never actually FINISHED reading one... because not only do I not see Harry as evil, but in the end they become rather ridiculous. If that's the way you want to go, that's cool... it's your story. You, obviously, can tell it how you want, and in the end there isn't a thing I can do about it, other than TRY to have an effect on your opinions by telling you MY opinions. But if that IS the way you're going to go, with an evil Harry, then let us know up front so I can not waste my time by reading any further. I have NEVER finished reading an evil Harry story, nor do I really WANT to. You're a good writer (decent grammar, your plotting is alright, etc.), so don't think I'm saying you're not. There are just certain types of stories I like and evil Harry isn't one of them. Anyway, good luck with the story, and I look forward to the next chapter (if only to find out that this is an evil Harry story). ;) Sincerely, Dragonmaster |
![]() ![]() Wow, I really enjoyed this story. I have a couple of questions though, are you going to make Dumbledore seem a completely twisted man, or are you going to give him some redeeming qualities? I think you should also give harry a Dakaathian demoness to Harry. |
![]() ![]() Have you played Final Fantasy X? Nidhogg If I can remember is a drogon monster on gagazet if my memory serves me correctly. Is that where you got the idea from? Another great chapter, looking forward to the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent work, looking forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME STORY!Can't wait for the next update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! Nice story! Ilike it. Exept for the part of Harry's lust for sex... Dont make him a sex drived creature pls! . And no slash also please! But thanks for a nice story) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, great start. The concept of Harry being part demon is certainly not an original idea but your take on it has kept me glued to the screen. I am very curious to see just how much Dumbledore knows about the Dakaathi as well as how having Harry's dakathi blood will manifest in Voldemort. Heck I'm just looking forward to chapter 4. As for a girl I'd like to see Dakaathi-Harry with... I'd nominate Fleur Delacour - how would a temperamental veela deal with his dekaathi charms? If that doesn't mesh with where you're going I'd like to see a few Slytherin girls fall to Harry, Pansy Parkinson perhaps? |