I must say that I like this story. I don't usually read stories where Harry is dark, but I LOVE stories that make Harry more independent and/or not entirely human. This story just happens to have both. I hope that you can update this story soon as I am waiting on pins and needles for what's going to happen next.

I read the last response to reviews in chapter 3 and the impression that I got of Harry's new disposition is that of a Vulcan - is logical and doesn't show much emotion, but feels very deeply. His human side would allow him to have deep emotional reactions, while his Dakaathian side would help him control them to a great extent.

I'm liking this story.

Is Tonks and some of the other female members of the order in the running? What about Angelina, Alicia, and Katie? I've never seen one with Harry/Angelina. And Cho, gotta have some Cho. He really needs to bang her.

Hope harry goes back to Hogwarts to kick ass and seduce teh womanz :D

"In his place would be born Harry Alphonse Evans, slayer of countless men and lover of countless women"...This pretty much sums it up doesn't it. Well, what else could you possibly want.

A pitfall for many authors when creating a new species or society (or OC, but that's another story) is that they become so enthralled with their new creation that they place it as the focal point of their entire story and leave more important areas underdeveloped. That being said I find your 'other' dimension to be rather interesting and developed nicely; I actually want to see more of it, expecially the royalty twist-so obviously the above is not an issue with your story...just a friendly head's up.

I'm sure you already realize the enormity of the task before both Harry and your story. The way the plot looks like so far Harry's mission will be to usurp control of the magical (whole?) world. While this is is not a new idea in fanon, I've never acually seen it done. Some stories have alluded to it, while others presented it as a fait accompli and moved on from there. I must admit to being very interested in seeing how you go about acheiving this lofty goal.

Greatly enjoing your story so far

-CarpeDiem

update soon! _ great story

Hi,

Your story is really great.

I love the plot line as i've

been looking for a story like

this in awhile.

I hope you keep on writing.

Such great stories like this

shouldn't be written half way.

Keep up the good work.

Neo.

lol, lots of bloody action, and sexual action eh, lol, you must have truly put alot of thought into the story behind harry's ancestors, cause the seemed so belivable, hm...a group of elite ninja assasins eh, now they sound interesting, lol, even more if they were all female, lol, any ways dont mind me, i'm just rambling away, any ways keep up teh good work and update soon V_

Praise to the great author who can write a super power harry fic on the same level as The Awakening of a Magus! Long have I a waited this day! Please keep writing I am dieing to read what happens next

Keep up the great work you are doing on this story!

upddate soon

the plot just keeps getting better and better good job, also it is nice to see a veela harry, i have have only come a cross one other fic with a veela harry called Emergence of Heritage it is good but the author hasn't updated in a while so keep up the good work

continue please this history is the best i ever read XD

continue please this history is the best i ever read XD

Great story

Great story. i cannot wait to read the next chapter. Update soon.