I don't really have an critisism or questions, I just thought I'd drop a note complimenting you on your story. It is very well written; it's descriptive, and original. You've also added a hint of mystery that leaves the reader guessing, which is always cool. Anyway, great story! I look forward to reading the rest.

nice job again i look forward to the next chapter

Well, quite interesting so far. This story definately holds great promise. Unfortuantely I have read far too many stories with great first few chapters in which authors simply abandon them-here's fervently hoping this is not the case with this story.

Are the wings Harry's currently sporting going to become a permanant fixture on his back? The way you explained them the answer seems to be yes. While they certainly add a certain flair to Harry's physique, it will make it somewhat dificult for Harry to be incospicuous while up and about. True he can fold him over himself and under a cloack, but the extra bulk should be readily apparent; or if someone comes in contact with him i.e someone brushes up against him or hugs him. Hm, perhaps some special sort of cloack which will mask the visibal and tangible oddities on his person?

Going by the fics title I am asuming the fact that harry's 'noble' ancestry will come into play...this promises to be very interesting.

Hoping to see many new instalments soon...

-CarpeDiem

Demonic counterpart to the veela. That could be interesting :P

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon

intersting, but it seems as if he is on the path of super duper powerfullness, perhaps have some powerful demon enemies to balance things out

Great work! I can;t wait to read the forthcoming chapters. Update soon :)

Unorthodox, but i like it

well, this story has certainly perked my interests...hm blood lust, and sexualy active...i'm listening, lol, any ways keep up the good work and udpate soon V_

I look forward to more

mwahhahahah

Death and sechs

How can you go wrong?

fave

Update soon -D

So should I start making up the list of Harry's harem now, or later?

A very interesting begining. your demons are interesting and well thought out. they seem to have a very fallen angel-esq quality to them. more concerned about the pleasures of the flesh than loftier ideals. which leads me to a question. you say that Dakaath are very driven creatures, but also possess reduced capacity form most emotions. what exactly are they driven to do? I would imagine that reduced emoions would render them sort of apathetic except in a sort of hedonistic incubus sort of way. I look forward to seeing what happens next and harry ensnaring a whole crapload of girls :)

It'salways good to see another exotic pairing author pop up, especially one with your quality. keep up the good work.

Hmm, interesting start to the story and I'm glad to see you've started writing one in the first place. I'm interested to see if Harry sprouts wings or something. Really have no comments as of yet since it's the first chapter, but I hope to see more soon.

great job keep it coming

Great to see you have finally decided to try your hand at writing yourself! A promising chapter indeed. Perhaps the title is a bit too complex, especially as the "destiny" part has not really started here. An interesting idea that he gets this weird feeling whenever he feels angry - a fine parallel to the pain in his scar; but does it have to be in his back? Sounds a bit too much like rheumatism if you ask me. I don't think he is out of character at all, we have got quite a few glimpses in canon of the disjointed way his thoughts tend to take, and as for the underlying anger and frustration, I'm sure they are very plausible. Of course he'll hate the "babysitting" and not being told things, too. Has he really become such an attractive young man that the girl in the shop keeps staring at him without knowing who he is? Especially as he is wearing Dudley's shabby ill-fitting hand-me-downs? It does seem a bit strange. Another thing that's perhaps a bit unlikely is that he can fool his "babysitters" so easily, - but then, perhaps he hasn't, after all. At any rate, update this soon, and let's see where it's going. I usually don't go in for DArk!Harry fics, but this one is well written and worth reading. And who knows, perhaps the Dark thing is only a phase that he needs to go through to finally fulfill his mission.

Interesting. Is the itch in his back a new mark of significance growing or wings? Or is it something else completely? Anyway, please update soon.