what the hell?!

did mione just stole his book?

huh reminds me of mulan a bit

you sure love your orientals

i prefer gary-stu type rather than this, but, alright..

oh come on.. really? a demon-god-in-demon-sword-to-entice-the-holder story?

You damn tease, lmao.

Seriously? Could have killed dumbledork but did not? And even left his wand with him intact. The elder wand. And left him with vital information that he can not take action upon even if he can not tell people? Right after you swore not be be an arrogant little shit? This is just becoming a huge joke...

Everything about the battle of Hogsmeade was completely pathetic and a borderline joke. And Harry claims he is a better leader. Suuuuuuuure kid. I thought the dathaaki blood was suppose to make him smart somewhat or at the very least not completely stupid. This is ridiculous. Not one moment was spent not cringing

When I first saw the path you went in regards to Ron and no doubt the other I felt sick the entire time. At the end of the chapter I vomited. Such a shame. Ron is such a waste of air.

4 chapters in and I had to quit.
One sec Harry is a badass demon, the next a stuttering fool that takes everything at face value and tells a village of random unknown assassins his real name.
No thanks.

Well since the content that you were worried about at the end of this chapter in Authors Note. I wonder what it is. I'm enjoying the story so far.

It was good but can you update

please update. this is one of the best OP harry fanfics that i have read so far.

So I guess all enthusiasm for fanfiction has dried up considering its abandoned status?