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Has frustrated me more than most things in most fanfics.

Not to say I'm only here for citrusy goodness, but goddamn I love my lemons.
Don't know if this is your's or the site's fault, but what can ye do I guess. Great story regardless!

I know this story is discontinued but maybe someone will answer the question...why is Harry taking everything a GOBLIN of all beings say at face value. It's a well known fact that Goblins HATE humans and they have their own version of how certain facets in history went. To think he'll make a good case out of any human wizard is laughable. How can harry be so gosh darn sure the chief isn't using Harry to promote his own ends while keeping his hands clean. Overthrow the government and it becomes favorable for the Goblins. Don't and it's detrimental to goblins but favorable to the people Harry once fawned over. Not very believable considering in the past (which you didn't seem to have changed) he never took anything outside of studies at face value. He was wary of Severus, wary of Hagrid's poorly disguised lies wary during the entire 3rd year. Suddenly he's not wary. I'm just curious, though I know the story's already discontinued.

order/balance/chaosshin megami tensei, it's better than good/evil themes

Sorry, but during Harry's and Bellatrix's fight I noticed that Harry blocked Crucio curse with a protego. I thought that the unforgivables were impossible to block

Loved the story. Hoping against hope for more or a rewrite.

I sincerely doubt Goblins have a "President". Kings? Rulers? Emperors? Monarchs? Sovereigns? Tyrants? Overlords? Those things do come to mind, but never President.

what up with harry being a bitch hes like call me harry not my lord and he didn't even kill one person as a example for attacking him booooooo

it upsets me that this is abandoned \ it was awesome

i wish you posted the removed content somewhere else man the lack of some of it sucks i also wish you hadnt abandoned this im starting to love it

I know this story is discontinued but its nevertheless a good read. Sure I have small complaints but I'm treating it as a real book not as a fanfic. I would have loved to read about cho's method of payback towards harry lol. Oh well .

I love this story so far its sad that its discontinued but I shall continue anyways.

I love hitomi can wait to see her back in.

I liked this chapter, it felt more like a set up for future chapters.

I really am done with this story now. I like to read romantic stories mixed with the adventure and suspense but you are blatantly making Harry cheat on his girlfriend. Why, why must he do this? Can he not be a normal fucking person and be happy with one fucking girlfriend or do you think that boys are allowed to do whatever they want. I don't care if he was a incubus, you stay loyal to your partner.

Harry and the other student defender's had to use such lethal force against the attacking death eaters not perhaps because all of them wanted to kill the death eaters but because they couldn't stop them by throwing stunners at them. They had no choice but to fight dirty as they did, that's what I think. There's no time for a chivalry in this war against Voldermort and his minions - not any longer! Why does Dumbledore talk to Harry as an adult, not as a child he wants to control - he might get somewhere? Why has no one much mentioned Harry, two new pets?