|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| Squidlers chapter 13 . 1/23/2005
IT'S FINISHED AND IT'S WONDERFUL AND THERE WAS A HAPPY ENDINGG AND
You're one of my favorite writers EVER. If you ever get a book out, don't forget to inform your loyal Fanfic fans.
'“Your head leaks, boy!” the Baron roared.' That's going on my list of Truly Awesome quotes. I think it's the "boy" that gets me- I seem to have a thing for "boy".
I was, at first, confused and indignant when you didn't write the battle scene, until I realized that this is a story about Hermione and Severus, not Harry and Voldie. And then I loved you all the more for not writing it.
I'm not sure if you know, but the end of chapter 10's cut off.
And I know this is smarmy, but I want to thank you for writing this. Snape is such an amazing character and it's so good to read a rendition of him that STAYS so amazing AND lets him live happily ever after.
| Anastasya chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Hey! It was very vile of to delete your story with ALL YOUR REVIEWS. Though its not like theyve never done it before. I can name plenty of examples when woderful fics like yours were deleted because of some anonymous letter to about violating raiting or plagiatrism (and those claims were false!)
Anyway I loike your fic very much. Ive been reading it since 5 chapter. Thank you for writing it.
| semuta chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Argh - I seem to be the only person on who can't get past chapter 1! And I've been checking every hour since it came up, too! Anyway, would like to thank Ramos for updating (and from what I can guess here, completing) this very fine work. You've taken an unusual subject and made it really interesting. Thanks for the update, hope I can read it soon! :)
| Ro.Kitsune chapter 13 . 1/23/2005
that was a wonderful story.
| GoddessofSnark chapter 13 . 1/23/2005
You don't know HOW angry I was when I found out that this fic had gone *poof* off of here and that the copy of it at Ashwinder hadn't been updated in the three months it had been since i had last checked in on it. And you don't know how exited I was when I got the alert that it was back...with new chapters!And an end!
I loved it..a lot. I've been saying that for every chapter, but i loved the end, although it could have been spread out longer...but that's just my wanting to see more of the fic. :) You scared me though-I almost though Severus wasn't coming back. Almost. :) Bravo!
| duj chapter 13 . 1/23/2005
Not often that death is the happy ending. Very satisfying story.
| duj chapter 12 . 1/23/2005
The whole polarity thing was a brilliant idea and bringing in the reversed rune - magnificent.
| b7-kerravon chapter 13 . 1/23/2005
| duj chapter 11 . 1/23/2005
She knew he'd be angry when he found out.
| duj chapter 10 . 1/23/2005
"If nothing else, being a ghost had taught her to watch and observe rather than directly attempting to influence anyone.' She does a bit more than observe later in the chapter LOL.
| duj chapter 9 . 1/23/2005
Hermione in a temper is one of the scariest people in canon.
Losing a friend always hurts whether he was a good friend or a bad one. You don't stop liking/loving someone just because he's got flaws.
| m4ever chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
omg you must continue this! its very good and i cant wait to see what happens next..i luv it...if you need any help or anything email me at legolas072 continue this story
| duj chapter 8 . 1/23/2005
Bad dreams - that's no surprise.
| duj chapter 7 . 1/23/2005
Great use for ghostly cold.
| duj chapter 6 . 1/23/2005
Braxdice - great explanation for his unhealthy look.