|Reviews for Invictus|
| LAKNDfoejb chapter 10 . 3/8
I love your story and I'm not expecting you to change it at all, but Luna Lovegood's father's name is Xenophilius Lovegood. Also, Neville's grandmother's name is Augusta Longbottom.
| get some class chapter 1 . 3/3
I'd just like to say I enjoyed this story thoroughly and I thank you for not deleting this. I do understand about looking back at past writing and thinking,"Oh GOD, how could I have been so childish?" Anyways, I love everything about this story and I am sorry that people are giving you a hard time when they really don't have a right to. I thank you again for giving us the pleasure of reading this fic even if you are unhappy with it. Happy writing
| bananafox chapter 16 . 2/28
i just wanted to say that this story is a lot of fun. it's a shame you aren't finishing it but sometimes you just lose your muse and i'm sorry people are giving you a hard time about. even unfinished this fic was a great laugh.
| notsofrilly chapter 16 . 2/7
I really liked this story. I usually don't read stories that haven't been updated in so long, but it was highly recommended and I was bored. I understand that you don't want to continue writing this story so I won't pester you about it but I have to wonder whether anyone has asked you if they can adopt the story?
| SicilyRoyalty chapter 16 . 1/25
Okay...I love this story. Do you know how difficult it is for a fan to love the fabric..and the author don't review for 9 years? If I had a heart instead of a shivreled organ, it would break!
| Rat-Man chapter 7 . 12/11/2013
Doctor Who and Terry Pratchett quotes? Man, you are awesome!...Good work story-wise and grammer too!
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/5/2013
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/5/2013
I Love It
| DrWhy chapter 16 . 10/28/2013
I love this story! Harry is so much more badass!
| yamiduke13 chapter 15 . 10/12/2013
I have really enjoyed this story and I think you have done a great job with it. I hope to see more of it soon.
| LadyVukavo chapter 5 . 9/8/2013
Was going to pm this request to you but couldn't find the option in your profile soooooo...
Quote:IMPORTANT, SO PLEASE, PLEASE READ: I need you to help me out with something. I want you, my beloved readers, to send me- either by email or in a review- the corniest, most terrible, cringe-worthy pick-up lines you can think of. As in, the types of pick-up lines that drunken men think make them seem suave and cute, but really just make them look like, well drunkards. Please- this is vital to Invictus' future. Sort of.
PLEASE...PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE...PLEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSS SE...can I have the full list of what you were given by any chance? Not just the ones you chose. I collect the oddest shite and corny pickup lines are one of 'em
| Slytherin of the Sea chapter 10 . 9/2/2013
I love the part where they talk about the sorting. It made me laugh :)
| Philosophize chapter 16 . 8/26/2013
This has been good. Will you continue it?
| Shawn chapter 7 . 8/15/2013
I find it kind of funny that you call it the Avada Kedarva instead of the killing curse. Nobody calls the Cruciatius Curse 'Crucio' or the Patronus Charm 'Expecto Patronum' just because they are the incantations for the spell/jinx/curse.
Other than that the story is great and I will keep reading, till I get to the end and give you a full detailed review. Till then.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
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