|Reviews for Cheated|
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/5/2013
I liked your idea for the plot, but your grammer and spelling are terrible. I can't read 'fallowing' one more time; it's following. You should get a beta reader to correct your errors and help you become a better writer. You have potential, you just need to refine your style. I can't finish this story as is, but good luck in your future writing.
| Grammarnaut chapter 28 . 2/4/2013
Heeeeeeel Heel Heel not Heal how could you get that wrong heal means to fix wounds and/or injuries and heel meens the thing on your foot
| RemSnape chapter 22 . 2/3/2013
Dont worry it wasnt boring and it was just the right length in my oppinion
| Grimshaw Redford chapter 6 . 4/23/2010
"Where have you been! Bed empty, no note, you could have died!"
Mrs Weasley moment!
| CinthiaCinthiaCinthia chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
You should get a beta reader.
I kind of like your plot and even your characterisation (?), but I really think your writing could be more careful.
| Momochuu chapter 32 . 6/2/2008
Aww love it!
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| Momochuu chapter 29 . 6/2/2008
yay for them!
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| Momochuu chapter 24 . 6/2/2008
Fast escape Hahahaha!
| Momochuu chapter 23 . 6/2/2008
Hahaha...Oh my Severus.