|Reviews for Hot Chocolate|
| SkyeSoul chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
I actually thought in the real storyline they;d like split up for two years and then coalesced again.
| Sapphos-Daughter chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
I feel bad for Ron but I can relate to how Hermione feels. Hopefully, both of them will find what they have been looking for. Please update soon
| Alpha chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
| im no muggle chapter 1 . 2/1/2005
i think you should do a follow up story set in a couple of years time so we can see the real hermione what she has become
| whatnamebutnoname chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
It is nice and that's saying something cause I usually don't go for one-shots, but hey, it is nice...
| kishkitten36 chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
I like it so far. I like the theme of Hermione going out into the world to find herself and grow up as an individual. I've tried started a few fics with the same fic because it's an idea that resonates with me. Being from a small town, I've seen how important it is for young people to leave the nest and go into the world and experience life away from the little safety zone. Just going off to college only a 3 hour drive from my little town did me wonders. In the 20 years since I graduated from High school, I've lived places sometimes hundreds, sometimes thousands of miles away in larger cities and, even though I wouldn't considered myself well travelled by any means, I think it went a long long way to make me a more open minded, well rounded person than had I stayed in that small town where everything is stagnant and depressed. I love the Hermione character and I love to see her go out and become her own person. Then she can come back and and blow away all those preconceived ideas those who knew her as a child. Updated soon and often.
I've read a few of your other fics and I really like your ideas and your writing so keep up the good work.
| Intelligent Witch chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
i love one shots that break hermione and ron up, forgive for this weirdness
and though i do like the ones where she's a real bitch to him because he cheated the ones that are quiet and have a lot more feeling in them make me happy too
| Rhyia chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
this is good. i can see it becoming more than a one shot after you've finished some of the other stories. i think it would make a great start for a sev-mione romance. but not until later.
| LilytheSpitfire chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
This was a great oneshot...and interestingly very very relative to my life right now. Sighs.
| bxn110 chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
very good! I do believe Miss Granger could accidentally meet a certain potions professor while traveling, don't you? :-)
Keep up the good work!
| Cherdy the Molologist chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
I loved it..any chance of continuing? It would be a great fic. You have talent
| ShadowHnad chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
Aw that was really nice! But poor Ron! He's so cute.
Awesome story. You know...*mischevious grin*...this doesn't HAVE to be a one shot-er. You could make the story about her crazy life afterward and maybe falling in love with a certain dark and cynical Ptions Master that was sent to retrieve her...hehe *evil grin*
Great job on this chapter though!