|Reviews for The Moment|
| deadly medley chapter 3 . 12/30/2008
i liked the present!I luv fireflies ...good job
| dfad chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
what dose jouchan means?
| klara-kind chapter 3 . 7/12/2006
LOL! I did not think the fireflies was a dum ideah.I liked it!Great job! _
| Windaerie chapter 3 . 6/16/2006
I like how Ayumu is going to save Hiyono's request for the next birthday. It's just like him.
| valeria chapter 3 . 11/29/2005
Hi! I really love your fanfic! Sorry, I'm not good at reviews... but anyway, the story was simply adorable! The whole birthday present plot was really cute, and you've done a great job in carrying out the emotions. Ayumu and Hiyono are so kawaii together! - Yeah! Well done
| suriru chapter 3 . 7/28/2005
hahaha, that was awesome. great job.
| Twinny chapter 3 . 5/20/2005
Although you have some grammatical and syntax errors, but i can see you put a lot of effort in writing this story...
Just try your best...I know someday you will improve a lot...
I have fate in you, i will always support you...
| Jisushika-Sensei chapter 3 . 5/9/2005
That was wonderful. Great story!
| xFilipina-Angelx chapter 3 . 5/4/2005
so sweet! great story!
| Ceil Scheherazade chapter 3 . 3/26/2005
That was nice...
| asilversamaurai chapter 3 . 3/22/2005
It wasn't lane! I wish I got fireflys on the roof... **Crys* oh well... anyway good job with it tis cute!
| asilversamaurai chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
I plove it! and yes i said Plove, don't ask...
| Outsane chapter 3 . 3/20/2005
Aw! That was so kawaii! I loved the fireflies, that was original! _
| FenixPhoenix chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
It is a very good story! You just have some minor grammatical errors, but apart from that the story is been written smoothly. Keep up the good work -
| SoraLover1 chapter 2 . 2/24/2005
I LOVE IT! KEEP IT UP! XD/