Reviews for The Four Apprentices
Shadowdog11 chapter 24 . 5/24
The ending seemed even less realistic than a harem story. Overall well written with minimal issues aside from odd character behaviors (odd in the sense of differing from their present structure, not canon)
Shadowdog11 chapter 14 . 5/24
And what exactly did Harry say that warranted a slap?
Shadowdog11 chapter 11 . 5/24
It may not be in Harry's character to fight back against Charlie, but it's certainly in Ginny's to make him pay...
NHPhoenix24 chapter 24 . 10/9/2015
Thank for sharing your story with us?
Worldmaker chapter 24 . 4/12/2015
Unfortunately, your justification for Ginny's reaction still comes across as "See how unreliable/unstable the Weasleys are? HARMONY FOREVER!" sort sort of childish vibe.
jon08 chapter 18 . 3/8/2015
Good Story, but a couple of times in this chapter I've noticed a mistake.
I propheSy that that the sun will come up in the morning.
I made a propheCy that the sun will come up in the morning.

Still a god story though, enjoying it.
x.erinb.x chapter 5 . 2/24/2015
Are they all dating eachother? Is this frigging sister wives?
kyoshi711 chapter 10 . 2/9/2015
This is my third time reading this and the story is still great!
EpilogueLover chapter 6 . 12/17/2014
Oh,.. severus died? :(
william488 chapter 24 . 12/3/2014
Loved it. Thanks.
PSay chapter 24 . 10/24/2014
I just copied Summer of Choices and The Four Apprentices as one long story to load on my Kindle so I can read it when I'm out and about. I read this long ago when you wrote it and I really like this story. I'm glad you are writing again. I look forward to more of your stories. Thanks again. pms
N Flamel chapter 24 . 8/26/2014
Very interesting (re)read! Highlights for me included the amazing combined power of Harry and the girls. I like that the power was primarily used to get rid of the dementors. Close to that was the relationships between Harry and the girls. Ginny's actions in the latter part of the story were shocking, since I'd seen her as mature as the other girls. But we never can know for sure, can we? And Ginny definitely buried herself through her actions and words. Oh, special mention goes to your use of the clock, specifically during the final six-on-six duel. Five seconds and Voldemort and the five DEs are dead. Very effective writing and an approach I've enjoyed in subsequent stories of yours. Thanks for another entertaining read! - N Flamel
N Flamel chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Since this story is a continuation of Summer of Choices, this chapter seeemed somewhat like a brief summary of SoC and a set up of things to come. Thanks for confirming what I thought about Harry's healing actions with Tonks. It will be interesting to see how this talent will be used in this story. Altogether, a good start. - N Flamel
hawkswench chapter 24 . 4/8/2014
I am wondering what Harry and Albus idea was. When Charlie was kissed by the dementor (sp) Harry was holding the cloak when an idea came to him. I am assuming that it might be a way to give a person back their soul from the dementor? Hermione in some way had a plan but you never expanded on it. Otherwise this was a great story.
hawkswench chapter 20 . 4/8/2014
I'm sorry but Harry needs to slap (or someone does) Ginny a good one. She is a little too quick with those slaps.
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