Reviews for A Bright and Beautiful Future
thereallegend123 chapter 5 . 10/23/2013
This was one of the saddest stories I've ever read. I empathize so much with Kaorin, and seeing her brought to this point is painful. What's worst is that you're a good writer and pulled it off realistically. However, I don't think you should take offense when people critique your stories; that's what these reviews are for. I never saw Kaorin as creepy or obsessive, either, and we are all entitled to our opinions.
ScOut4It chapter 5 . 1/29/2011
Trouble in paradise.
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
Found it! (I love Google)

Oh and this line was eye-catching, "Kaorin realized that she didn't want to be like Miss Sakaki. She just wanted her." yeah.
Jes chapter 5 . 7/10/2010
Just finished reading all of your chapters (sorry if you don't like that but I prefer to review stories as a whole rather than chapter by chapter) so far I love what you're doing with the character development of Kaorin and I'm very interested to see what you do with her as you progress with the story. For some reason I really like seeing unfulfilled love interests actually getting a shot at the object of their affection. I've saved this into my facorites and will be eagerly looking forward to any updates.
duke69 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
NOTE this is not a complaint about edits.

however if you don't want people commenting on them you probably shouldnt have said anything.

and if you already have the story posted somewhere why bother posting it in a different place?

anyway chapter 1 was pretty good so ya...
Dat fucking writefag chapter 5 . 6/24/2009

I wish you would update it since it's a interesting Psycho-thriller.

It's an interesting aspect you brought up about Kaorin. It seems really believable that she would try to turn into a new person to come closer to Sakaki-san.

Personally I think Sakaki is only interesting in the show because of Kaorin's obsession. And surely the focus on Kaorin we hadn't on the show after the second is getting expanded really well.

Keep up with the work!
Ranaye chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
i cant find it...the unedited version...can you help me out with a link or something please? id really love to read more. :)
Billy Rose chapter 1 . 10/11/2008
I couldn't figure it out on that site you said to look for it at - have you thought of putting it up at adult fanfiction . net at all?
TheoneandonlyKaorin chapter 1 . 5/24/2008
I don't know what TOSed means, I assume it means it was tooken off site. Why? Because of content? I've seen some stuff on this place that should have been rated m, and they don't get removed.

And what is foss dot net? I want to know what it is before I go there. I really want to read it without these stupid edits, but I hear people saying it's not there.
Vert Citron chapter 1 . 3/17/2008
Wow! Awesome grammar, nice story, and great wording. And I can't find this on that site. :(
Katsu chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
Um I can't read the real story, it's not showing up on that site.
Taiyo Seiyuuki chapter 4 . 7/30/2007
hm...thx to this story I really hate Kaorin, and my love for Kagura has grown even stronger good job anyways tho:P
Duggums chapter 5 . 5/7/2007
Terrifically insightful on the character of Kaorin-easily one of the most accurate portrayals of her that I've ever read. Impressive, since you're not just keeping her static-you're developing her, along a believable path. You do a fantastic job of describing a relationship between Kagura and Sakaki, as well. It's sweet and wonderful. You're definitely a skilled writer. Please see this through to whatever end you plan for it. I'll just hope it's a happy one for everyone, or at least Kagura and Sakaki-but if not, it'll at least be a well-written and believable one.
Lilyxxxhentai chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
I want to read the unedited version but can't get to the site. every time I try to search I get these German words which I guess say the site doesn't exest so Please tell me What the hells going on! I wanna read your work not the cencered crap! please tell me how to get the real Fanfic...

P.s I don't have email :(
Icey chapter 3 . 3/29/2007
A very interesting perspective on Kaorin and I thought the relationship between Kagura and Sakaki was both sweet and quite realistic. I enjoyed the story a great deal, but is there a version uploaded anywhere without the (edit)s, they make the story feel slightly disjointed.
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