|Reviews for Æternus Praestolatio|
| Qoheleth chapter 1 . 7/27
Actually, no, "Æternus Praestolatio" doesn't mean "eternal expectations". For one thing, "praestolatio" is singular; for another, it's feminine, whereas "aeternus" is the masculine form of "eternal"; for a third, adjectives in Latin generally follow the nouns, rather than precede them. "Praestolationes Aeternae" is, I believe, the phrase you were looking for.
| megacharizat chapter 13 . 3/31
wait...if Harry is 25 years old...and Severus is 37...that would mean that Severus was twelve years old when Harry was born...
| Astrido chapter 19 . 8/12/2017
i'd like it very much if you could just post the notes you had on how the story was supposed to end.
| Latias876 chapter 19 . 4/24/2015
Who is taking over the story?
| cztelnik chapter 12 . 3/20/2015
I did notice instantly the tribute to Discworld and if Zabini turns out to be anywhere near as cool as Rincewind he'll be great.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
it really sucks that you discontinued iy. just when it was getting good too.
| fmoura98 chapter 19 . 12/17/2013
I wonder if you're still receiving notifications for these reviews. If you're seeing this, I just wanted to let you know that I loved your story. Yes, it wasn't perfect but it was definitely interesting. Until the deaths started, I almost expected the Vipers to turn out to be the good guys. I saw the Neville twist right from the start but I didn't really think about Snake's identity so that one caught me by surprise. I cringed at some parts and was captivated by others. Stories like this are the reason I usually only read completed fics but this one was in someone's "Favorite HP Fanfic" list and I decided to check out the first ch. Big mistake, I guess - or not, I did enjoy the chapters we got. It might be worth being eternally curious about the ending.
I understand that it takes a lot of time to write the chapters especially when you're not super motivated and it's been ages since you've posted anything here. But if by some miracle you do read this, I was wondering if you would consider writing an epilogue from the point of vew of a surviver of your story. Just one chapter to show what happened and how it affected the characters. It might be cool and not terribly long if you'd write as someone reminiscing about the past. Just a suggestion, of course.
Thank you for the story, it was a great ride.
| bldude chapter 19 . 12/1/2013
Oh dear, I'm not sure if you're still around, but I am interested in trying my hand at picking up your story- if only to see what happens next in your notes after this dastardly cruel cliffhanger! :D
| EmptySurface chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
I love your dark, sarcastic and utterly brilliant humor! I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
| Anonymous chapter 19 . 6/3/2013
Your story is really quite interesting, I have to admit. If someone takes it over, would you please add a new chapter that says who has taken it and is continuing it, so that ppl following your story can know? I wish you hadnt discontinued it.
| shadowlynx chapter 19 . 5/8/2013
seriously?! you end it at jayden is neville!?
are you trying to turn your readers against you?
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/20/2013
Please...I can't stand the suspense... U gotta finish it!
| Elise chapter 19 . 1/14/2013
Very interesting and amazing story!
| Yuval25 chapter 19 . 11/5/2012
OMG! You have to continue this! You have to! Please! For me! For the readers! FOR THE WORLD! I'm begging here!
I loved it! It was original and surprising (very surprising. Oh my GOD Neville? NEVILLE?) and I couldn't move my eyes off the screen for a second! Very well-written, it was! Characterizing is wonderful, although being wrong. It was truly a pleasure!
And, my God, I couldn't help but notice you did something I actually did love and have never came in contact with before: You know how many writers here, when changing someone's name, like instead of Harry they need him to keep his real name secret and he uses something like Daniel (example) instead? They always, when writing in his perspective, write him as Daniel ("I've never..." Daniel said, brushing his hair. He noticed it was too shiny for his liking. Daniel blah blah blah). It's okay, writing him as Daniel in other people's perspectives, because they don't actually know his real name, but I couldn't stand him thinking of himself as Daniel. And you just solved the problem, like that! Without even putting any effort in it, you solved it so easily! It is something to be admired for. You wrote Harry's perspective in first person (how is it called in American terms?) view, wrote him as "I". It was exceptional and refreshing! Genius!
I really hope you'll continue this magnificant story! Into My ALERTs!
| Rain chapter 19 . 9/13/2012
Hi :) I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story, which I read a few years ago in my fanfiction phase, and have now re-read in my horribly-sick-and-stuck-in-bed phase. I was wondering if, since it's been discontinued and no one has adopted it, would you be willing to post the secrets. Like why is Neville Jayden?What to the Vipers want in this war? I completely understand you discontinuing the story, since I've done the same thing in the past, but I have so many questions!