Damn! This fic is great!

I love how well you kept the characters IC... and good for you for dealing with suicide so effectively... good job. It was serious, but somehow felt NC/0-ish...This is worthy of adding to my favourites list...

...And good for Jamie to try using a gun instead of cutting his wrists or overdosing. I still want someone to commit suicide through act of Zoid, though.:p

*Claps* Wish I could do IC-ness like that... oh well. Back to writing ZO, I guess. :p

-Steve/Koobine

Woah, a fic that mentions/deals with suicide that isn't full of trite overdone psuedoangst?

Of course I had to leave a review.

And no, this doesn't suck. It's readable, in-character, and interesting. The way both of them are kind of along for the ride, standing in someone else's glory...it's nice to see people thinking about that.

And Bit and Vega being swarmed by fangirls...haha. Poor Vega...

God, I'd kill to write half as well as that. I can't exactly identify why it is, but your style is considerably different from most. The plot was... fair. Better near the beginning, but the dialogue was the best aspect of this story. About the only thing I can say is that Brad's speech was slightly out of character, which doesn't really matter. I look forward to seeing more such pieces from you.