Reviews for Rising from the Ashes of Betrayal
whitebuffalowmn chapter 25 . 7/15
a great story! ... what there is of it ... I hope you continue with the updates. thank you for writing this tale.
BastardizedBitch chapter 21 . 4/28
Fuck the order. Fuck Dumblefucker-the-child-rapist.
Saissa chapter 25 . 1/29
Great start!

But it is sad that this has clearly been abandoned.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/8
Please update please
SortingHat chapter 3 . 11/11/2015
Did you by accident mixed up another fanfic on here from a different fandom?
Flying Chrissy chapter 25 . 8/23/2015
interesting story! Look forward to the next update.
Grey chapter 12 . 7/27/2015
American. American. American. Did someone say Salem?! Seriously, if the obvious "author inserted into her own fantasy" wasn't bad enough, you have to go down the clich├ęd "American Harry" route. I tried to wait it out and see if an actual story was going to emerge but no more. I just can't stomach this crap.
paulmoss chapter 25 . 3/23/2015
Loving this story please finish it.
Guest chapter 25 . 3/18/2015
can you update this soon
phoenix-rob chapter 25 . 3/8/2015
Please if you are still out there writing, I'd love to read the next chapter. It is too great a story for it not to be finished.
madnessdownunder2 chapter 25 . 12/12/2014
very nice! Who could do it? Ron, Hermionie, madam Longbottom? Especially if she believed/ Mabe Minnie, since she is so far up Dumdum's butt she wouldn't even try to deny him!
Guest chapter 20 . 11/17/2014
To indicate possession in anything ending in "s" already (eg. plurals, nouns, names etc.) you just add an apostrophe (').
chrysanths chapter 20 . 9/28/2014
Severus'. Remus'. Sirius'.
Blacksnipster chapter 25 . 9/1/2014
Whats bettin serpentine's hermione.
Excuse me but chapter 23 . 7/17/2014
there is a sentence that translates to "And when you do, you are spell intensity will have increased", which does not make sense.
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