Reviews for Hero, Villain, Saviour, Conqueror
God1643 chapter 26 . 10/9
Called it! Boom!
God1643 chapter 25 . 10/9
I'm gonna guess that Nimi is Sirius and Mel's daughter.
I'm probably wrong.

Great story!
SaiyaCat chapter 1 . 10/9
God1643 chapter 14 . 10/7
God1643 chapter 1 . 8/22
Nicely done; just the proper amount of foreboding and explanatory. A difficult balance to achieve; like getting Holly and a Phoenix Feather to work together. ;)
noxenrom chapter 2 . 8/5
Stardreamer? Really?
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29
Hey, I thought I should let you know that some of the lyrics to the song "Once Upon A December" from the movie Anastasia are incorrect. It is actually this,
"Dancing bears,
Painted wings,
Things I almost remember
And a song
Someone sings,
Once upon a December.
Someone holds me safe and warm,
Horses prance through a silver storm
Figures dancing gracefully
Across my memory...
(Pause for music)
Far away
Long ago,
Glowing dim as an ember
Things my heart,
Used to know,
Things it yearns to remember,
And a song (short pause)
Someone sings,
Once upon a December..."
Guest chapter 32 . 6/1
The plot was good.. the writing had so many plot holes, incomplete sentences and horrid grammar that approx half way through I skipped to the end to see what happened and was not surprised to be disappointed.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/13
raging fire storm chapter 1 . 5/11
loved the story...but seriously...atleast fininsh the sequel if the 1st is ending in a cliff hanger
Lilly chapter 16 . 4/29
I think Mel's daughter is Luna.
Celtic Shadow Mage chapter 6 . 3/9
wtf is this? it is oh so very confuzzling...
Celtic Shadow Mage chapter 6 . 3/9
weird... just weird...
Guest chapter 32 . 1/11
What a dumb fucking ending!
SortingHat chapter 5 . 1/6
Not my cup of story but as far as the writing goes I don't see anything wrong with it.

What I don't like is you almost changed the chapter names to something stupid using the word *of* but after a few times you refrained from doing it anymore and to that I give you praise.

I hate it when chapters are named really stupid and druggy.
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