Reviews for Hero, Villain, Saviour, Conqueror
automaton14 chapter 8 . 9/29
Seriously. Where did he get his wand?
automaton14 chapter 8 . 9/29
Your author note hasn't helped me understand anything at all ever
automaton14 chapter 7 . 9/29
I wish I understood what was happening with dude in the mist.
automaton14 chapter 5 . 9/28
Did Harry suddenly acquire a wand or something? Where did it come from?
automaton14 chapter 4 . 9/28
Transfome incantatem. Good effort on that incantation.
FrostwhiteStorm1614 chapter 15 . 9/13
wtf dumblydoore
Ratus chapter 16 . 9/10
I would want to know who betrayed me to Fudge and the rest of them. Then make an example of them to everyone else in the realm.
Shadowdog11 chapter 20 . 9/4
Do we get to read "chapter 21: the interrogation and torture of Dumbledore followed by a slow painful death?"
Shadowdog11 chapter 19 . 9/4
I guess one could do use a student as you did with Blaise. My ussue is their being defeated so easily by this auror from the first war... They just participated in a huge battle reaping vampires and stunning Death Eaters and whatnot... But they get stomped by a has-been auror. It's not consistent with the treatment of the auror corps. I'm not a huge fan of the electives as it would make a much more rounded/competent student/citizen which also isn't consistent with your model British Wizard/witch you've portrayed
Shadowdog11 chapter 16 . 9/4
Oh so someone else posted about Earl of the North too. That was the name I couldn't think of. Similar, but still very different.

Seems like the control over a sovereign leader is a bit high for the ministry...
Shadowdog11 chapter 15 . 9/4
Maintaining prisoners for 16 years is kinda lengthy... Seems like a bit of a hard sell there. Also I hope Dumbleshit is skinned alive.
Shadowdog11 chapter 4 . 9/4
Omg crush the Fudge! Can't wait. I don't know if I had started this before, but either way I'm enjoying the setup. This is similar somewhat to another couple of stories I've read, though not near enough to be the same. Just want the heads to roll !
MessyBrownCurls chapter 15 . 8/25
You know its devilish to a t keeping 'the wives' away from 'the men' and unbelievable to think Dumblydore knows there location. Frustrating! Awesomly frustratingly beautiful story
Refraction of Light chapter 3 . 8/19
I'd just like to point out that a female name under a different language does not mean it is not viable. I mean Jennifer used to be a male name. In the culture I grew up in any name that ends with A should be considered a female name, Then I had Japanese and Russian friends and it's not the case with them. It's all relative I guess.
robwar80 chapter 9 . 8/12
I know at chapter 8 who the man in the grey mist is
It is Sirius
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