|Reviews for Visions of a Winter Scene|
| snarky Beth chapter 3 . 7/31/2009
This story's so good, if you ever post more I'd be happy to read more :) Mirage and Buddy both had such heartbreaking stories to share, and their realtionship's very close. I love their interaction, and the backstory of how they met was interesting. Lovely work :)
| boo56 chapter 3 . 1/18/2008
| CapitaineCartoon chapter 3 . 5/16/2005
Argh! What do you mean by "Consider this story finished until then!"? You just can't do this! You have to finish your story. It's just great, it needs a fitting conclusion. Your writing is really, really good. Hell, I hate Carrot Head, but you've managed to make him sympathetic, even to my eyes!
There is your challenge; Your're coming up to the hardest part of the story, where your own material will have to blend with what we've seen.
You can pull it off. Now please, update soon.
| KELLIE chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
This is awsome if i were t orank it it would be 10/10
| Darkness Shadow of Hatred chapter 3 . 5/11/2005
back seat? YOU MUST HURRY WITH THIS, I"LL GET IMPATIANT! P_LEASE I BEG YOU! PLEASE! *gets down on hands and knees* PLEASE! anyway Keep up the good work and hurry up! .~v
| Artist Of Akatsuki chapter 3 . 5/11/2005
OMG! I loved this chp! *sniff sniff* poor poor Buddy though.I feel so bad for him in this. I hope ya continue soon. You no i can't wait for more then a week for someone to . Awesome job!
| Darkness Shadow of Hatred chapter 2 . 4/30/2005
omg this is so great! you must to a 3rd chappy you must...with more romance! m suger coating...hehehe keep up the excellent work!
| Shinigami Ree chapter 2 . 4/9/2005
Wow, this is great. I hope you get that third chapter up soon.
| CapitaineCartoon chapter 2 . 4/4/2005
Hey Blackfire 18! Your story is great! It's really powerful. I remember reading and enjoying the first chapter a while ago but I didn't notice you wrote it... This is the first review I've ever written!
I love the way you paint the characters, they are three dimensional, they are alive. You have a great, cinematic sense of timing, I find that really important in a story. Just to take the time to tell something, well, you've got that.
I like your idea of Mirage having a traumatic event from her childhood change her, I thought about it briefly in my story also. It makes sense.
What you wrote is very touching.
Well, there it is, I love it, and like they say, Update soon please.
| Artist Of Akatsuki chapter 2 . 4/3/2005
you said we can request more romance right? well anyways I REQUEST IT!lol. i lov stories lik this of syndrome and is how much i lik it. i read this story everyday! update soon!:)ill b looking forward to it!
*adds 2 favorite author and fav story*
| Me chapter 2 . 3/30/2005
*Claps* What a beautiful story! Please update! I'll await the next one with a good mood and a box of cookies :) Heh, heh... Keep up the good work! _
| Clio36250 chapter 2 . 3/28/2005
OMG, that's so sad...Poor Mirage. Still love it, though. Next chapter soon, please!
| Clio36250 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Wow, this story's so sweet! I love it! It's great, really. See ya!
| Bologna Salad chapter 2 . 3/26/2005
Beautiful story! It's definitely my favorite Mirage/Syndrome fic and probably the best written Incredibles fiction I've read thus far. You must continue with a third chapter!
Good luck with that!
| puppiescute a.k.a. Mic Mic chapter 2 . 3/25/2005
I'm requesting I'm requesting! *waves her hands back and forth* I am seriously in love with this fic. I was actually looking for an Incredibles 2 movie but this is enough and better than any movie. I mean I always thought that Mirage and Syndrome had something going specially when he tried to kiss her. Now looking back on that after I read this fic...it makes me so sad to think that Syndrome was almost going to let Mirage die...
Anywayz as you can tell by the long review I REALLY like this story. If you could please email me when you update. Also could you refer me to some good Incredibles fics. This is the first Incredibles fic I have ever read and reviewed as I just saw the movie Sunday so I wanted to wait.
Thank you for writing this though. Your a wodnerful authoress and I hope you continue the chappies. .