Reviews for Angels and Devils
SuperSaiyanTeemo chapter 10 . 9/26/2013
Cool story, a little different from the cliche bonding stories of them which i like
bluekitnaru chapter 6 . 5/27/2013
is he bottom or top?
emthereble chapter 10 . 5/11/2013
THIS IS BRILLIANT !
Mashkai30 chapter 10 . 2/26/2013
Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!
Talizora chapter 10 . 12/12/2012
I remember reading this story before, I think it was a few years ago actually. Loved it then, still love it now. Great work, some minor spelling errors but nothing a quick re-read/edit might fix.
Der Puppenmacher chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
that's pretty cool
i can't wait to find out more about seraphims
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 10 . 10/7/2012
The almost end of this fic. I can hardly bear it. But I will just so I can go read some of your other works. :D!

Funniest explanation in the world. I think most people prefer not to think guest have sex in their hosts' house.

Took him out with a house cleaning spell. Can't say I ever saw that coming. xD!

Gosh, that was awkward how he found Cissa.

Overprotective mother alert. But really, Draco was already a Veela. Harry just changed him up a bit into something much more powerful, I might add. Besides the lack of kids this union is likely to produce, she has no need to complain.

"I have not seen the look of joy on Draco's face which graced his features as you collapsed on our doorstep, since before his father was killed." Boy that sentence was filled with prepositions. I had to break it down into each one to understand, as I'm often forced to do with such sentences.

Daaaammmmnnn. Listened to all their conversations. Quite embarrassing.

"Did you mean it when you told him you wished to learn to love him?" Another great quote from last chapter I forgot.

Think I hear wedding bells on the horizon! :D!

For some reason *cough*Draco*cough*, the Weasley's slipped my mind entirely. If I hadn't seen them for the rest of the fic, I don't think I'd have noticed. But Molly's words were rather touching.

'"My mother is a fair healer," Draco said politely and turned towards those in the room as if they were now worth his interest.' xD! Died.

When Remus questioned Narcissa, I begged her not to reveal their sexcapades at the lunch table. xD!

That last part before the epilogue was so perfect I'm not sure what to do with myself. The whole bloody section. Learning each other. Fighting. Trying to know love. I'm a gushy mess over here.

"The hottest, most bone melting kiss known to Wizarding kind. You could have been doing it beside the train as far as anyone with a sex drive was concerned." Hot. Very hot.

Well, unfortunately this is the end. Thank you for a very pleasurable day. I'm thinking this story will go down in my personal view of history. :D! Here's looking forward to the next. ;)
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 9 . 10/6/2012
Still irredeemable?

Harry's making moves. o.o

Still irredeemable, but less so. I'll take his fear into account. It's only fair.

Yes. You brought my twins. x3

I saw that coming.

"Briefly he felt sorry for the elf he was bound to hit on the way down..." xD!

"Stuff our friends," he said vehemently, not willing to allow Draco to hide behind rationalities, "they don't have to live with the longing and the knowledge that they aren't whole. Every time you cast a spell I feel it; every night I go to sleep knowing that I'm going to dream about you; every day at school I sit on the other side of the hall dying to walk over to you. My whole bloody house knows I'd rather be sitting with you. Over this entire holiday, the fact you weren't there has been killing me. I didn't take off in the middle of a snow storm because I'm a complete idiot; I did it because I had to. My body wants you, my mind wants you and my magic wants you; I can't fight it anymore. I want to love you, but to do that I have to know you." Damn. Respect.

Redeemable.

Definitely redeemable.

"That was before I shagged my way into the arms of the devil," Harry replied in kind, "now I'll just write my memoirs, sit back and watch the money roll in." He could actually do that. xD!

Especially memorable lines:
"You feel it too."
"Every second of every day."
and
"I need to know that I'm yours, that you accept me. Please show me, Draco."
"And I shall have you."

Much more significant this time. Much better for the heart and soul. Much more than just sex. They made love.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 8 . 10/6/2012
I'm thoroughly pleased by the overwhelming support of the 7th year Gryffs.

Ah. The "sore" reaction got my Cheshire Cat grin.

My gosh I love those Gryffs. They are taking spectacular care of him.

Draco's breaking my heart now. :( Ohhh, my stomach's twisting up in knots over this rejection. I feel it quite acutely.

Snape gets on my ever lasting nerve. I think I'd hex him.

Harry's better than me. I sincerely think I'd take a few more personal days and camp out in the hospital wing. I'm weak. I couldn't stand the constant rejection. And from a supposed life mate? Nah. For the sake of my own personal health, I hope his behavior is corrected by story's end.

I'm glad Snape seems to have some boundaries, at least. Still think I'd hex him.

This boy is trying to drug himself to numb the pain. o.O That's it. It's time to kill Malfoy.

Now he's looking suicidal. I'm sincerely hoping the 7th year Gryffs cursed those bloody Slytherins into an inch of their lives. And I've changed my mind. Malfoy doesn't deserve my Harry. ;(

I'm glad you didn't kill him, but swear, when Malfoy showed up, the only thing I was thinking was, "Screw you. Get away from him. You don't deserve to talk to him, let alone touch him." Foolish, perhaps, as Malfoy will likely save Harry's life in turn at this point, but I don't care. My stomach is still in knots over the bastard's constant nonchalant rejection.

Screw that. He damn sure has no right to use Harry's given name.

"I felt your magic." You bloody fucking bastard. -.-

I've still got my "screw you" attitude on. I'm currently feeling like Malfoy still isn't worth it, whether he saved Harry's life or not. Though I'm wondering what he felt in Harry's magic that made him come running. He might be redeemable despite his utterly heartless Slytherin-ness.

Maybe it's terrible of me, but I find myself hoping Harry gets hit by a Bludger. Potentially knocked off his broom. It's my annoyance at his show boating. But if such an action heralded Malfoy into action, perhaps displaying, publicly, his concern or whatever for Harry, all the better.

Damn. So much for that. But at least Harry got what he wanted.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 7 . 10/6/2012
"Malfoy, about your species, it just changed." xD!

Oh. My. Gawd. O.O

Lol. Never read a Veela fic where the trait gets removed. xD! You're altogether new.

I think Malfoy forgot Seraphim bond for life. :o

Oh, my poor Harry. That is great cause to be bothered over. :(

THANK YOU! Bout time someone saw it my way. Harry's a life-saver, not an assailant. -.-

Alright McGonagall. Making threats and such. I dig it.

Remus seems to not know Seraphim mate for life. His suggestion was almost inexcusable.

And looking at it again, Malfoy's words really were harsh. Surprised I didn't pick up on that when he first said them. My poor Harry. Don't we all know how it feels to want and not be wanted back. :/

I'm quite upset this fic is almost at its end. Has to be one of the best Veela involved fics I've ever read.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 6 . 10/6/2012
Lol. Well that's a bit awkward, i'n't it? xD!

What to do? Shag and get it over with! :D!

Oh shit. O.O

Well shiiiiiiiittttttttttt. No real words. I'm overcome by the sexiness of it all. And after reading the LJ version and comparing it to this,... so glad I first found this story there. x3

And I can only imagine what well happen when they return to themselves. I think they'll bring Hogwarts down in their rage. xD! Ah, but I hope Draco gets pregnant. xD! That's saying something, as I'm not usually big on mpreg, but I can't deny the desire.

And of course, spectacular writing as always.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 5 . 10/6/2012
Assaulted? Injured party?! Are they all nuts? Harry very well may have just saved his and Malfoy's life. I'd be damned if I let them get away with making me out to be the criminal. Harry needs another bloody hero award or something.

Lol. Loved the McGonagall translation.

I appreciated the strength of the locked door. I wonder if his roommates ever got in. xD!

Lol. Damn. And here I was hoping they'd start a snog fest in the middle of the Great Hall. xD!
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 4 . 10/6/2012
Damn. We ain't kidding around. Started that off strong, didn't we?

Ugh. Acidic voice. Not a good start. x.x

*jaw drop* D: I can't believe Crabbe actually tried to hit him! D:

Pimpin'. Harry is absolutely pimpin'.

Lol. Malfoy even surprised me.

Swear, saw the touching bit coming last second, but not quite like that.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
Ah. Now we're getting to the good stuff. Trying to impress Malfoy, are we? ;)

Lol. Gosh, I love Neville. He is so underestimated, and that annoys. He's clearly brilliant.
"There was silence again except for the sound of shuffling feet and Harry thought that his friends were probably having the same epiphany about Neville as he was. No one ever rated Longbottom at anything but Herbology and yet he seemed to be far more than he at first appeared." Bout time someone noticed. xD! (My first comment was made before this group epiphany.)

Love Hermione, too. No nonsense, that one.

Oi. You killed Lucius. o.o

I think your Veela is the first I've read that doesn't mate for life. Mate quite frequently, actually. o.o

"It was all so confusing. In some ways it had been so much easier when Voldemort was still alive, at least all he had to worry about then was dying." Well damn. xD!

Gotta love the Gryffindors.

Oh la la! Are we going to actively pursue Malfoy now? :D!
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 2 . 10/6/2012
No Lavender didn't. xD!

I think the announcement thing is his best bet. Trying to keep hiding it is going to wear on him.

A perfect break to what could have been mortifying. xD! I'm impressed Ron didn't even blush. I'd like to hear the thoughts in his head when he realized Harry heard him, though.

I fear for Harry and those talons. Accidentally castrate himself. x.x
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