Reviews for Start of something good
untapdtreasure chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Oh. I really like this. They were so good with one another. I adore their squabble at the end.
carolann chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
Very nice short story. I liked the teasing between Devon and John. Thanks so much for sharing.
tgmoxie chapter 1 . 8/28/2001
I really enjoyed the story. The angst in the E2 show that built up was never allowed to get far. It wasn't alluded to much in the "future" storylines either.

My only criticism is that I would have liked a more elaborate sex scene (but that's just me).
Anna McLain chapter 1 . 4/13/2001
Good job. You did well with the characters.
Didi chapter 1 . 4/6/2001
Oh my goosh, I laughed until I cried. I love this story. Do another one.
StarKitty chapter 1 . 4/4/2001
Nicely written story, although you might like to watch those tenses (you changed several times-just a minor thing, sorry) Anyway, I hope you write more! There's never enough well written E2 fanfic out there :)
PC chapter 1 . 3/21/2001
Loved it. A new D & D story! VEry nice
lisa chapter 1 . 3/16/2001
I really enjoyed your story, I hope that you will write a sequel.
Lady S chapter 1 . 3/9/2001
This was good.