Reviews for Little Sister
Queen of Cliffies chapter 5 . 11/21/2005
good story, but could you make the chapters a little longer?
Keridwen89 chapter 5 . 7/29/2005
I reckon you should have brought her in as Jordans 'unknown' sister. It would have left many many options open for a longer story! Also its a little unrealistic, Max and Jordan calling everyone in to explain. They're both so secretive! But well done anyway.

Apart from that, its great! I love CJ!
berta101 chapter 5 . 7/27/2005
I got no idea's but your doing great!
SuperKelli15 chapter 4 . 7/23/2005
MORE! MORE! MORE! PLEASE!
MartinaCruz chapter 4 . 7/21/2005
Just found this story and I love it! Please hurry with the next chapters!
stephk00013 chapter 4 . 7/19/2005
good story. keep going!
XcrossingjordanX chapter 4 . 7/19/2005
Please add more I love this story!
Ivette Boveda chapter 4 . 7/18/2005
Now I know how people feel when I write short chappys! However, you could have given an example of an argument had by Max and Taralyn
Ivette Boveda chapter 3 . 7/18/2005
Max! you the old devil! Anyhow, You background story made

sense for the most part. I'm loving this story!
Elisabeth Carmichael chapter 2 . 1/30/2005
Oh, please continue! I like it a lot...very interesting. Update soon! Side note: longer chapters please!
Ivette Boveda chapter 2 . 1/25/2005
awesome chapter, though you brought up more questions than you answered. Why wasn't the girl living with Max?
inspire.me chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
lovely... very intruiging... you so have to keep writing or you'll leave me in suspence forever!
Jasper's Tears chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
hey dont end there must be more

but plz up date soon
Ivette Boveda chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Interesting...Since she's a teen I'm gonna assume that she's Max's. I'm intrigued!
XcrossingjordanX chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
i love it please continue!