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Gemini-M chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
Hi 24,

Very nice happy ending to your story.

Mercy
lovetowrite390 chapter 3 . 1/29/2005
Another great chapter! I love how they have the FBI in there now...I cant wait to see how the Centre is brought down! :) Keep it up!
Gemini-M chapter 3 . 1/28/2005
Hi 24,

Well I hope that the FBI's plan work and they can bring down the Centre. Nice Job. Please update soon.

Mercy
pretender fan chapter 3 . 1/28/2005
wow! this so too good to be tru, but hopefully everything will work out!

i hope that jarod would be able to confront miss parker during some prt of this stry (im a die hard JMPR shipper so plz forgive me) lollz!

update soon!
lovetowrite390 chapter 2 . 1/28/2005
Interesting. You still have my attention! Great job so far. Update when you can! :)
Gemini-M chapter 2 . 1/28/2005
Hi 24,

Very interesting how each character thinks about Jarod's involvement in their lifes and how they feel about his possible capture. Please continue soon.

Mercy
sara chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Wow!

Intriguing story you have got going on there.

I can’t wait to read the rest of this one! Hope you’re going to post a new chapter soon. Who are those mysterious people, will they find Jarod before the Center?

I’ve gotta know, please update soon.
pretender chapter 2 . 1/27/2005
aw, its like im in parker head n im hearing all her thoughts!

cant wait to read bout jarod in the next chapter!

update soon *hopefully wit some JMPR in it* lollz
Gemini-M chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Hi 24,

Quite a little mystery you got going here. Someone else is after Jarod? Will they catch him before the Centre? Please continue. I'm intrigued.

Mercy
lovetowrite390 chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Hm...Great! Please keep updating this one! ;)
Nans chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Wow, someone got a hit on Jarod BEFORE Broots (snickering)

Ok now what are you gonna do.

I personally would give Miss Parker sleeping pills.

Send Broots to a tech seminar

Hang Sydney upside down and dare Jarod to save him, but then that is just me.

Will check back to see what you come up with.

Good start ;-)
pretender fan chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
umm... wow dis is confusing...but a good confusing! lollz

i hope this is a JMPR story! lollz

update soon!
Working Girl chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
This can't be good. Who is after Jarod, and what are they going to do to Miss Parker, Broots and Sydney to keep them away from Jarod?

Great start, and don't keep me hanging. Post again soon.