Reviews for Break Away
amaya chapter 2 . 9/2/2005
me: not bad, actualy. i liked it anyways. songs?

me: shut up you!

alison: soory.

me: sorry 'bout that titangirl161! my freind alli is a big jerk.

alli: hey!
RenaYumi chapter 2 . 3/9/2005
that was great update soon. love ur story.

Lyoko-Luver chapter 2 . 3/8/2005
the other one was better. it had more of a meaning to it. you should keep going on with the story.
Neo Aguni chapter 2 . 3/8/2005
I think u did a good job on both chaps

update soon plz
Aelita Lyoko the 2ndVirtual Freak chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
RIGHT ON! That is such a cute little thing. THe only thing missing is the fact that Aelita loves Jeremie. (was it there? I might of missed it.) lol. I am a huge romatic. Sorry. :) LONG LIVE THE GANG OF CODE:LYOKO! HUZZAH! (I know, I've been to one too many medevil fairs.)
dantheman7777 chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Well, I don't care much for the song in song-fics but the way you portrayed Aelita at the end was perfect. I thought you did a good job of staying in character (excluding the first paragraph, of course). This story is quite good with all the little details. You're a good writer so keep writing (CL fanfics).
RenaYumi chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
very good. keep writing!
Flying Star too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Wow! This was great! I love Aelita fics. Ones in which she

wonders if she'll ever escape, and realizing that all things are possible.

This kindof reminds me of an Aelita story that I'm writing now as

a sequel to another one. Her feelings of worth are

ones to ponder, that's for certain. Yours certainly

ended on a more positive note than mine. Definitely write more, maybe one

with Jeremie, perhaps?

Great Job ! _
Saphire-089 chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Wow. Good for your first!
Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
That was really sweet! I loved it!