Reviews for Counting Up
kimbari chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
This is SO good. I love, love, love stories about grownups and sex and after finally getting to see BSG, I am totally onboard with the Lee/Laura ship.

How sad, the ending, but this is the way grownup stories end, sometimes.

Good job. Good characterization and excellent writing. Thanks for this story.


kate98 chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
It's disconcerting to switch from hot to tear-jerking that way, Lyss!
aikakone chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Rough nothing! This is a most excellent fic in my shiny new ship. I just like it. I also like the sexual imagery and the way you wrote it. The genius is in the small details like how they kept quiet and didn't cry out. A VERY good story.
MsRaven chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
Very nicely written...once I got past the ew factor, that is. Sorry, but I just had this whole mother-son thing going in my head.

So I'm figuring that he couldn't call her "Laura" in his head because he didn't want to get too close. But the ending now makes me wonder if that was because Apollo thought it was just relaxing for her or because he knew she was dying. Hm...