|Reviews for Abracadabra|
| Bobby chapter 3 . 12/15/2013
Best story EVER!
| Blackmola chapter 3 . 1/13/2013
Oh holy Loki.. this is absolutely magical story. I have never red better, and i mean it really. Its difficult to decribe Wonkas personality, because its so complex, but you handled it perfectly.
I am aplauding as much as i can, u r simply awesome. Please, more of these stories.
I do not want u to have the feeling that i just thoughtlessly praise ur story, so I want to tell u about height of Charlie. Wonka is tall and i dont think Charlie could ever be taller :D But each person can imagine it differently, so its not a mistake, just my idea :)
Thank you for the opportunity to read this. It makes my.. not day, all week :)
| Mostly Harmless III chapter 3 . 10/1/2012
The language in this is pretty much awesome. I really like how you chose to say what you were saying. It was believable and a little sad, but very romantic and sweet. Such solid descriptions and a whole lot of magic! Thanks for the read!
| COWSARECOOL chapter 3 . 8/10/2012
I see lots of whipped cream in their future...and they won't be putting it on pies hehe. ;D
| DragonSapphire chapter 3 . 7/19/2012
This really is the most gorgeously enchanting story. Absolutely stunning work!
| Motaku1235 chapter 3 . 7/13/2012
I love Charlie/Wonka fics.
There world! I admitted it! I admitted it right here on the world wide web!
Great job! XD
| Xohaku chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Beautiful. I can't describe the wonderful feeling I had while reading this. It was full of emotions, and they felt so real that at one point it was as if I was the one who was feeling them. I was also amazed at how you could describe Wonka's brilliance and uniqeness, yet you could still change him enough to make him even more wonderful. A 'thank you' won't be enough to express my graditude for you for writing this, but it is all I have, so thank you very much. :)
| InuTrickster chapter 3 . 6/18/2012
This is one of the most beautiful, well written stories I've ever read. This tops even published novels on emotion.
| FreakFreak chapter 3 . 4/20/2012
This is so beautiful! I love it! I lvoe the amazing fluidness of the words, the action, the EVERYTHING! It is better than ordinary prose, it is poetry, beautiful beautiful poetry, and absolutely, heart rendingly PERFECT.
Thank you so MUCH for putting this up! You're an amazing writer! :)
| Obscene Cupcake chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
Incredibly realistic for the wanka universe.
| Angelpoppet chapter 3 . 2/18/2012
I have a totally dopey grin on my face after reading that :D
| Tazmainian Devil chapter 3 . 1/25/2012
Wow. Just, wow.
I was recced here and I admit to being a little surprised by the paring but this was so, so lovely.
The way you blended the ethereal fantasy factory and the visceral (some times mouth watering) way Charlie viewed it was gorgeous, the slow burn desperation of the romance was so painful and sweet, and you mentioned the Vermicious Knids which made my day.
The Great Glass Elevator gets overlooked a lot because the story is completely bizarre - not that 'Chocolate Factory' isn't bizarre - but I really appreciated seeing your take on how the Bucket family was changed by the rejuvenation of the grandparents and how the fame they had garnered by the end of the book impacted Charlie long term.
Sorry to be so long winded. Amazing story, I wish it were twenty chapters long even though it doesn't need to be.
| AnimeAddict4Life chapter 3 . 1/2/2012
awesome this fic is magical and beautiful, pure genius
| wanderingmaiden chapter 3 . 12/19/2011
I've never read this pairing. odd...and unexpectedly sweet...
| Akuro13 chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
so beautiful...even more beautiful than the Chocolate Room! There was so much emotion and depth, I can tell a lot of thought went in to this and you did such a magnificent job writing this out. truly wonderful.