*reviewing after about 3 years of having this story saved away and often re-read*

... heh, just one of the best slash stories ever written.

I loved it at first sight, I still do and I always will.

thank you for this, you are so talented *w*

This story was my first CatCF fic YEARS ago, back when the fandom was new in 2005, and it's still my favorite, and I still recommend it to people.

I just wanted to pass along my admiration for it. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story.

While I'm open-minded enough, I very rarely read slash and even less Charlie/Wonka slash - it just doesn't feel right to me. That said - your story was magic and I loved it. Wonka was so amazingly in character all the way throughout, and the love scene was beautiful, although the technicality of it felt, at least to me, a bit odd. Then again - I wouldn't have a clue, so I can only say Well Done for the magic.

fuck.

I am amazed, purely amazingly, amazed. I don't even remember the last time I saw Charlie and The Chocolate Factor, now I HAVE to watch it.

Hot damn! Where did you learn to write like this! it's so... so tender, and sensual! Just pat yourself on the back, give yourself a freaking hug.

praise, praise, praise

This story was very beautifully written. I really liked the confectionary descriptions of Willy and Charlie's daily lives.

This was magnificent. Well done.

That was *amazing.* Beautiful, lyrical, dreamlike, and fantastic in the oldest sense of the word. I liked that you captured Wonka's frantic energy, but having it through Charlie's thoughts, his own steadier, practical approach, made the whole thing slow and sweet. Just right.

I just wanted to let you know that this story never fails to leave me breathless. Every single time I read it I am blown away by the beauty of your words and the delicacy with which you write Charlie and Wonka's relationship, and can't help but think that your username is very fitting :). This is utterly, utterly beautiful.

I truly do love this story. *tips my hat to you*

I found this story a few weeks ago and I cant get enough of it. Its exstremely well worded and has so much detail that I cant help but read it over and over.I have been head over heels for yaoi for a few years and this has to be the best story ive read yet even if its only 3 chapters and ive read stories with large numbers of are a very good author.

Wow. Wow. That was amazing. Possibly the best story I've ever read. Wonderful, wonderful chapter. Wonderful, amazing story.

Terribly fantastic. :)

Holy crap. That was amazingly intense and I loved it. So very much.

This is fantastic! I love it very much.. Wonderful, wonderful story!

:runs off to read the next part:

loved it

Thank you, so much.

I honestly do not think I know how to put into words what I am feeling or thinking at the moment.

Pareidolia, I hope it doesn't offend or make you uncomfortable, but I'd like to '1' your review, as you appear to have gotten across (absolutely wonderfully) what I am having such trouble with.