That was one of the best stories I have ever read, and perhaps, will ever read.

My first Charlie and the Chocolate Factory fanfiction, ever. And I love every minute of it.

I ached when Charlie ached and cried at the end of the second chapter. It was one of the best, most emotional, stories I have ever read.

Ever.

Thank you for this.

Wow, i enjoyed this, happy fate lead me to it!

well i found your story by a round about way. There is another author that had you as a fav so i checked it out and read your story.

I really enjoyed it, most wonka/charlie fic i kinda squick at cause of the age thing. But you did a wonderful job of aging charlie but yet keeping the character voice.

The story is bittersweet,

What happened to Wonka before? I mean he seemed to be wanting and afaird at the same time.

I hope you write more, your a very good slash writer,

Pegster

Yay! That was great! I loved it! I was well plotted and had more of an emotional physological view of their relationship than other fic I've read. Great job!

Yay! You had me clapping for joy when they first kissed. It's amazing! And so are you for writing it. Thank you!

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It's all so sappy and angsty and sweet, and I can see the characters being this way. Thanks so much for writing!

Oncore! That was amazing! I can hardly believe I am still sitting in the same place that I am, you transported me. That was wonderful, heartfelt, beautiful, it was simply dazzling. To say you have a way with words is to much of a cliché. You matched the characters, Charlie was different but in the older sense, he had aged but was still Charlie. Willy, well, wow. The way his mouth looked as he tried to decide whether to go outside or not was picturesque in my mind. Thank you, really. That was simply marvelous darling. Please keep it up! :D

WOW. Just WOW! This is one of my all time favorite stories. I went through a roller coaster ride of emotions. I was sad, hopeful, excited and happy. The scenes where Charlie is at the graves, they were both very lovely, I almost cried. The bringing the outside inside-out was very cute, I loved it. You did very well at portraying a future for those two. I very much enjoyed reading this. I would love to read more of your writing!

OH MY GAWD.

This is one of the greatest fics of all-time.

I would do a review of each chapter, but this way's easier. :)

Ch 1: Brilliant. Just brilliant. I can see how Charlie wants SO bad. VERY angsty, I love their twisted relationship.

Ch.2: First kiss. Love how you describe it, very interesting. The connections with the sugary substances is cool too.

"Oh, well, but this subject makes me rather uncomfortable, and I’d really rather not discuss it at the moment when I have invoices to take and outvoices to send and isn’t there something that needs my attention in the Inventing Room and oh my goodness but I think I left the iron running!" Wonderful sentence.

Ch.3: This is more toward the lemon side, but it's WAY better than most Lemons. It's REALLY romantic. Oh, and the oompa loompas are AWESOME here.

This fic has got to be the greatest representation of their relationship. It's very dark. I love it. The language you use is exquiset, and although it's long, it's wonderful.

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

interestingly enough, i found this story through someone else's review to an aspiring slash writer. telling them to come read this first and then try again. clearly, i couldn't resist. and it was amazing.

That was amazing. The details were vivid and well done, the characters extremely loyal to the book, the plot sweet and thought out. My only regret is that I can't find any other pieces written by you... I have never read anything nearly this brilliant before. At first, I was quite hesitant when I saw someone's recommendation of this piece, but I am extremely glad I read it. I can honestly say this is the best piece of fanfiction I've ever read. Astounding job.

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I am stunned into utter speechlessness...

Holy Hell, this is amazing O_O /utterly transfixed/ This 'fic is the first foray into the world of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory slash (Wonkaslash? ; Candyslash? Chocolateslash? _ ), and I am so glad I took the chance. :DD

Thank you so much for this..I was beginning to despair of reading something that really gets to me. And now, on to the next chapter! XD /really so happy that there is a next chapter../ :D

OH and I'm adding you to my author alert list, favorite authors list, and favorite stories list (I think this is done, so I don't need the Story Alert, do I?)

Because I am just that impressed XD

Gorgeous. Absolutely, utterly gorgeous.

Wow. Brilliantly written and perfect characterization. I've not read any fanfiction for CatCF before, and wasn't sure what to expect when I started this, but I am so impressed. :)