Wow. Very Nice. If I may offer a suggestion, just remove "THE END" from the end of chapter 3 and start 4 with the world shifting around Lisa. Don't apologize for HEA! :) I would have felt a bit hollow if the tale had ended at chapter 3. Thanks for sharing your fic with us.

I loved happy endings. No matter what Rick and Lisa will always be together. You did a great job. Two thumbs up. Please make more fanfics of Lisa and Rick.

To tell you the truth Lisa, I'm not really all that happy that you added a chapter and in it you made the 3 chapters to what amounted to be a dream sequence. I really thought the story the way you had it originally was good enough and it didn't have to be added. I am not a fan of every story having a happy ending. You can call me a cynic but I'm sorry, not all stories can have a strictly happy ending.

Oh I love "What if" stories and this one is a great "what if".

Thank you for adding chapter 4. I thought it was great at the end of chapter 3 even though it was sad. But you really made me happy with chapter 4. Thank you!:)

I thought everything's ended in chapter 3 and it was a sad ending in chapter 3... but a nice one at that... but you made a big blast for chapter 4... you made me happy hahahaha... GREAT WORK!

Nice on how you gave Rick and Lisa a second chance...by making Rick's sacrifice a dream, or at least a hellucination. You even made sure everyone lived. You made many fans happy-I know I am.

*Applauds* Thank you for chapter 4! Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU! :)

I liked it...a lot, so very much so. After the third chapter, i was thinking there was no way that was the end. Thank you for a great story.

Nice additional chapter, even if it was a bit of the WAFF. LOL, great, you have given me a soft spot for my favorite couple again.

Well, bless your heart for giving this a happy ending, and a marvelous one at that! Excellent!

I loved it! THANK GOODNESS you added chapter 4. I also LOVE happy endings.

Great job!

Great AU story. I always love AU or alternate ending stories. It gives me another side of a movie or TV series I like. The story was gut wrenching, heart rendering, emotional, tragic and sad. But yet at the same time, is was touching and heart warming. However, I think a more appropriate Bible verse for Chapter 3 is John 15:13. "Greater love has no one than this, than to lay down one’s life for his friends." I think it sums up what Rick did.

This story is very sad but very emotional and touching. It's very well written too! It almost made me cry, and left me feeling all warm inside... and sad. I really loved it! It's one of the best AU stories I've read and I praise you for that! I think you captured Lisa and Rick's characters in a perfect way and your dialogues and descriptions are awesome!

Keep up the good work! This story is really good!

So sad. Poor Lisa, poor Rick. Enjoyed reading it.

Very sad yet heart-warming at the same tme. I really felt sympathy for Lisa at the end, and had gained a new respect for Rick with his decision.

I can't wait to read more of your work in the future.