|Reviews for Rats in a Maze|
| Kendoka Girl chapter 1 . 2/13/2005
Most excellent use of intrigue here. I love how you utilize the mind game aspect and it plays out well in a very dark way.
The writing of Helo's discovery of the bodies and his reaction is very realistic and well done and adds a great deal of depth to the story.
I get the feeling that I am reading about real things that happen to real people and it is ratchets up the suspense several notches.
Well done, Alice
| theriversoul chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
Very nice, sad but pretty. Thank you for the review you left for me!
| Kathy-SFF chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Great story.I loved the interactions between "Sharon", "Six", and "Doral".
| Darlian chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
So that’s what happened to Helo, huh? Neat sequel to your first fic. I’m assuming you’ll be writing more as the series continues…_