Your story is amazing i really enjoyed it. what if i turn your story into a comic and by comic grab you more audience, what you think about it?

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Please continue this story soon pretty please.

A bit jumbled & confusing but interesting

Could you please fix the punctuation here.

Please please PLEASE continue this!

This is a very good story,

Are any of your stor's available on the web now? %-20-16? The three places you you listed were all on ani-fics which went dow last year.

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Good story with a good ending.

Ok, overall, it was an amazing fic, it had a great premise, and all in all the character interactions and fight scenes were amazingly written. I do have some complaints/issues though.
1 Bullets probably wouldn't do much to Ranma, certainly not as much as it did. Ranma has survived far worse multiple times. If you needed crippling wounds for the story, try coming up with a better explanation.
2 The characters speech patterns seemed off, Akane and Ranma sounded like college professors when talking to the family, for example.
3 the spelling and grammar mistakes definitely got a bit distracting
4 a few tons was easy for ranma even before the boost. when fighting saffron, it was stated that he threw around 3 ton boulders easily.
5 Genma, has an invisibility technique, and in the anime so does Soun.

Beyond impressive, but add to darkness. Happosai had a mental Moxibustion point to manipulate Ryoga beyond his limits. They find it on examination, then go headhunting the perv.

Amazing story thank you and great job!

this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

Dang sweet story, I hope you take it up again!

The story itself wasn’t bad though the characters where somewhat OOC but as this is a different universe that’s fair enough.

The spelling and especially the lack of capital letters in the appropriate place needs a lot of work though. I had to spend about half an hour in correction before I could read the story and that is not to good or something many people are willing to do.

I don’t know if you plan to continue this and if so how but if you do I will have a look at it.

This is crap. I'm sorry, but it really is. The premise... Well, it's garbage too. In fact, this whole fic makes me ill to my stomach.

I'm an arse, yes, I know, but I call it as I see it, and as far as my eyes can tell, there's not a single damn thing about Men of Iron that's redeemable.

2/10 points. It would have been 1/10, but the fact that Men of Iron is the only Ranma 1/2 - Iron Man crossover I know of keeps it from that fate. But only barely.

Great story