|Reviews for Betrayal|
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/1/2014
Please continue this
| fh chapter 3 . 7/1/2014
Omg so sad :'(
| peachymomotaro chapter 12 . 1/6/2008
This is a really intense fic. I like it. Please update it as soon as you can!
| thegreatwhitewolf chapter 12 . 11/3/2007
Aww it's so good. I hope you update this!
| thegreatwhitewolf chapter 4 . 11/3/2007
Sorry about your boyfriend. If it's any consolation, there's a guy who has a crush on me and he told me that he wants to make out with me but he's engaged. I can't believe he said that. Oh well. Back to your story. This is very interesting so far. I like Davis angst. It's good to see him portrayed as trying to hide his sadness with a mask of happiness. You've done a good portrayal of him. Sucks about his family. :( Keep up th good work and I'm off to read the rest!
| E.S. Simeon chapter 12 . 9/29/2007
Wow, this is awesome! Very incredible and nice elements to the story. I like it a lot. You have developed so much into the characters that it's amazing. Go on and continue this, take what time you need because the story is going very nicely.
| Kyukitty chapter 11 . 5/17/2007
this is amazing! please update real soon! w
| Khgirl08 chapter 11 . 2/7/2007
update soon... please? :)
| YumeTakato chapter 11 . 2/6/2007
Great chapter, see ya next time!
| BlackHalliwell chapter 10 . 11/11/2006
interesting but kool
| Stained In Negativity chapter 10 . 11/5/2006
I love this story The plot is so original. Please update soon! I'll be here waiting.
Stained In Negativity
| YumeTakato chapter 10 . 11/4/2006
Good chapter. I enjoyed the read, See you next chapter!
| BlackHalliwell chapter 9 . 8/8/2006
| spookpook1 chapter 9 . 7/16/2006
PLZ get the next chapter up SOON! Your fanfiction is getting really good, not that it wasn't in the first place!
| yuffiegal chapter 9 . 7/15/2006
oh come on! don't leave it here!:) *jumps up and down*