Reviews for The Cry of the Seahorse
Kit-cat99 chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
ok this is really cool and good...update soon please!
xoxobriTtAnyxoxo13 chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
longer chapties!

and update soon
LadyMalfoy730 chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
:( This upsets me... I don't like Ron/Hermione... and why is Draco being so nice? And when you write, make sure to go to a new paragraph between dialogues... it gets confusing if they're right next to each other... example:

"hello hermione," harry said.

"Hello Harry. how are you,"Hermione asked.

"I'm fine, you?"

See? it makes it easier for the reader... just a heads up!

Update soon!
cait xo chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
good fic... chapters are a little short but thats okay! update soon please
mistress meo chapter 4 . 1/31/2005
a good start. more please. Update soon.
MRS SASSER chapter 2 . 1/29/2005
im disappointed! only 2 chapters, and u left us hanging! i wanna know why he said 'hermione'... hmm.. update again soon! please! i think this is really good.. i love when harry and ron are the bad guys , and she finds comfort in draco :).. anyway. UPDATE SOON!
Hermione-Malfoys-1 chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
hey i like yoor story so far keep up the good work..hurry up with another chappy!

FariyWhore chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
hey this is a good story, you could really get some were with it please update soon
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