Reviews for Lyin' Eyes
GQSecondAct chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
this was pretty good. :)

an interesting point of view. the song was very fitting for this piece.

keep writing!

absurdvampmuse chapter 1 . 1/28/2005

This was really good and I enjoyed reading it.

Bye, smile :-)
LLFOREVER chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Oh, whoa, Whoa, WHOA! One parter? Hello, can you say... sequel sequel sequel! This was AMAZING! I loved it. The end was great. Just so... oh, it was awesome.
Bittersweetbloodbaby chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
Lovely story, I don't know who the husband was but for some reason I've got this picture in my head that he's kind of Dean-like...passive, not so bright, puppy-like. The story being told from his point of view was an interesting twist, but here's where I start looking pathetic and beg for a part two, or a different point of view. Just something to consider if you're bored, and can't think of anything else brilliant to write...