Reviews for Commander Kaylee McKnight
Tony the jew chapter 4 . 2/24/2007
Great story up-date soon
SarcasticEnigma chapter 2 . 2/11/2005
awesome update, i love kaylee. she's such a cool character. as for suggestions, from the way you wrote the falshback with her and gaheris and the way she acts around rhade and about her past, she and gaheris must've had something going on. you may want to put a little something in that when you elaborate on why she was late in the next chappie. update soon.
Danelle3 chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
I like it. It has a good start. You should really pair her Rhade.

Keep up the good work.
Rommie's Secret chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
I think that you have some good ideas, and an obvious nack (nack?) for writing. You should consider geting a Beta reader to take care of grammer and stuff, it definately helped me! Great story so far. Keep writing!
LittleRedhead chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
Good job. I can't say I have a preference as to who Kaylee should be with.
SarcasticEnigma chapter 1 . 1/28/2005
this shows promise. keep it up. i'm sorta guessing that kaylee and gaheris had a thing? if so, pair her with rhade. it would be interesting. if her and gaheris didn't have a thing, pair her with rhade anyway, there already seems to be something there. update soon!