|Reviews for The Wrath Of DemolitionMan!|
| xSerenityIsn'tAlwaystheAnswerx chapter 12 . 3/16/2012
I loved this!
| Quixiote chapter 3 . 12/23/2008
The Dentech lib part was so KAWAII!
| erikacaptor chapter 12 . 3/2/2007
Hey Alisi me again! and this is a great story! you make the best Megaman stories!
| Arisu Tsuranu chapter 6 . 6/19/2006
| CheeseyWonder221 chapter 3 . 12/30/2005
Hey! I have noticed that your writng is amazing ,a nd you seem to know alot about MegaMan NT Acess. I was going to write a fanfic about RollXMegaman , Roll would get kiddnapped in Internet City , and Megaman would try to save it ,but i really don't know much about the story , so if you wanted to , you could write it. It would be amazing! Like all your other storys )
PLEASE? it would be cool... On this stor y, its amazing!
| Chi Ookami chapter 12 . 12/3/2005
Awesome this is such a cool story _
But I don't really c where the Mega/Roll pairing is but I c where Lan/Maylu is. But it's still awesome _
| Lady of the Shire chapter 12 . 8/19/2005
Lady: WAH IT'S OVER...yay now i can make a big review on how good it is...
lady: wait...i can;t do that without Billie...where is she..oh yeah...
::Billie and Megaman still in a wrestling match:: BILLIE STOP SCRAPPING AND COME OVER HERE!
::Billie and MegaMan drag themselves over::
Lady; I dont know why your fighting her...shouldn't you be more mature than this
MegaMan: ...she started it.. and Iam defending myself-OW
::Both Billie and Megaman are pulled painfully up by a familiar cahracter::
ProtoMan: MegaMan what ARE YOU DOING?
Billie: LET GO YOU-OMG...OMG...!
ProtoMan: who is this and ::to lady:: who are you?
MegaMan: OW-that's-OW Billie and Lady-
ProtoMan: Billie...Oh no Not YOU
Billie: ::rips of her jacket and shows her "I love Protoman" shirt(A/N: no i don't know where she got that)
Billie: PROTOMAN WE!
Lady: uh-oh...man you better run
ProtoMan: I remember you, your're that stalker that kept following me everywhere...KEEP HER AWAY FROM ME OR SHE GETS IT!
Lady: you stalked him..-_-
Billie: ::heart shapes for eyes at ProtoMan:: precious!
Lady: Billie what have I told you about stalkin' people?
Billie... WE ::attacks Protoman::
Protoman: AH IAM OUT OF HERE, LET'S GO MEGAMAN.
MegaMan: but i want to help with the review!
Protoman: the what...-_-
Billie: YAY! ::tackles ProtoMan::
Lady: anyways, good job with the story, I LOVED IT!
MegaMan: :: overviewing story:: wait, i do WHAT! HEY THAT'S NOT-
Billie: ::pauses with attack::OH MAKE ONE ABOUT PROTOMAN!
ProtoMan: make one of what?
Billie: STORY DAMMIT, JEEZ I THOUGHT YOU WERE SMART!
Protoman: ...are you calling me stupid...::fumming::
Billie: yes- OW WAH HE HIT ME- OW STOP-AH
Protoman: OKAY I HAVE ENOUGH ::GOES ON THE OFFENSIVE::
::NOW A REALLY BIG FIGHT IS GOING ON!::
Lady: okay we have to go savebillie but i really loved the plot and how you developed from a conflict with one navi to the main character-
MegaMan: ::still reading:: I DID WHAT!
Lady: - And the imagery you used so we knew exactly what the characters were doing! We hope you create a new story soon, so thanks from Lady of the Shire and Billie...who is in a crisis- PROTOMAN SHE IS A GIRL!
ProtoMan: no she isn't,she is AN ANIMAL!
Lady: okay let's go help...MegaMan...?
MegaMan: I WAS BADD?
Lady: oh no
MegaMan: i killed who and did what? ::crying::
::runs over to Protoman- beating up on Billie, who has launched her theeth into his arm- ouch:: MegaMan: readthis!
Protoman: ::multi tasking:: man you go screwed...up
MegaMan: -_- okay i can accept this...NO I CAN'T WAH! ::pulls out a longsword:: WHERE IS THIS ALISI!
Lady: uh-oh okay iam going to stop now before you get to any moral danger
Lady:we will look forward to your stories in the future!
| BanbieBunny chapter 12 . 8/16/2005
It's the bro. of Banbie Bunny reviewing!
I like the explanation you have for Megaman's problems and how he wasn't deleted. That was put together very well. :-)
I have to say that the ending was a little odd. I can understand earaches, (I've had one before, I hate them) but I can hardly see Chaud shedding tears at the end. I like the last relationship you had with Lan and Maylu, it really sounded nice.
Well I think this story was very interesting over all. You did a good job Alisi! Congratulations!
This is the bro. of Banbie Bunny logging out.
| Lady of the Shire chapter 11 . 8/7/2005
Billie: oh great so no MegaMan is the bad guy and doing that other dude's work...WHAT THE FREAK IS HIS PROBELM DAMMIT..::ATTACKS COMPUTER SCREEN::
LadY: NO THAT'S MY ONLY ONE STUPID! and besides aren't you worried that hes badly hurt now!
Billie: die MEGAMAN
Lady: ::to the sky:: she doesn't mean it!
::suddenly a portal appears- hey this is a review...anything can happen::
Megaman: hmm...maybe i should have taken a right at-
Lady and Billie: O.O
Megaman: huh? who are you?
Lady: iam Lady of the Shire and this is-
::Billie issues out a longsword::
Megaman: O.O WHAT? I DIDN'T DO ANYTHING
Billie: AH! ::attacks::
Megaman: okay you wanna fight LET'S GO!
::major battle in background::
Lady: ::sigh:: anyway, what's with Chaud, he's not talking at all...he he iut's kinda funny-HEY!
::Billie and Magaman fall on Lady::
Lady: WOULD YOU TWO NIMRODS TAKE IT OUTSIDE!
Lady: NO I DIDN'T MEAN IT AH!
Lady: okay that does it. IRON REAPER SOUL STEALER (isn't that what Inu Yasha says?- I luv when he does that)
Megaman: ::dodges: what the- OW!
Lady and Billie: ::sit on the navi:: just one thing megaman...CAN WE HAVE YOUR AUTOGRAPH!
| BanbieBunny chapter 11 . 7/28/2005
This is the bro. of Banbie Bunny reviewing!
This chapter was a little short, but I liked it just the same. There's one little problem though. Not in the writing, you wrote this chapter alright, but something else. I find it hard to believe that Megaman would be in danger of deletion after being shot by just three charged electric blasts. Just three? He is stronger than that. Oh well, I do like the scene with Lan and Maylu. It is pretty nice how she tries to comfort him and how they both feel for Megaman. I hope your writer's block goes away, I can't wait for the finale!
See you later.
Bro. of Banbie Bunny burrowing- I mean, logging out.
| Lady of the Shire chapter 9 . 7/12/2005
Ladii: oh i have a spreader battle ship!
Billie no one cares... so he's bug style megaman again
Ladii: bug style...
Billie: WO BUG STYLE NOW ALL HELL WILL BREAK LOOSE WO MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
| Lady of the Shire chapter 8 . 7/12/2005
Billie: hm...i don't remember a in the show...maybe i missed the episode
Ladii: that Demolitionman is such a meanie!
Billie: did you just say "meanie' that SOUNDS SO BABYISH
Ladii: shut up!
| Lady of the Shire chapter 7 . 7/12/2005
Ladii: wow did you figure out this navi all by your self and its attacks?..it sounds like is something that would actually come from the show!
Billie: i like that name "Demolitionman..."
Ladii" DON'T EVEN THINK-
Billie: fine...i won't dress up as him...
Billie: OMG CHAUD ACTUALLY SIMLES...I THOUGHT HIS FACE WOULD BREAK IF HE DID THAT!
| Lady of the Shire chapter 6 . 7/12/2005
Billie: aww poor roll and she is my favorite too
Ladii: that steam must have really hurt her, wow
Billie: I wonder what Demolitionman exactly looks like...
| Lady of the Shire chapter 10 . 7/12/2005
Billie: WO MEGAMAN IS BEING A BIT-
Ladii: BILLIE NO HE IS NOT! but...its kinda cool to see him acting evil
Billie: of course it is, its always good!
Ladii: and to think I almost missed the episode when Megaman changed for the first time into the bug style!