Reviews for Are You My Sister?
AnnaFan chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
The story is great, you have imaginations but there are some grammatical errors and the personnages are a little bit OOCs
midorinohime chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
the story is cute... but there are some grammatical errors... lve it despite of it. _~
WildSilence023 chapter 14 . 5/2/2009
Your story was great. I loved the way you portrayed Hao as the overprotective brother.

You could fix your grammar a bit but I didn't really mind it because the plot developed quite well.

I look forward to more of your work. _
CoolVibration chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
umm horrible spelling? but the story's nice
Amber chapter 14 . 8/20/2008
I LOVED your story!

Normally I don't read such long fics, but this one was really good..

Grammar was quite bad sometimes, but it did help me to stay sharp or whatever xD

Nice you found someone for that..

Loved what you did with Hao by the way!
Sjhina chapter 14 . 8/10/2008
HAO~! I can be ur Fiancee Rofl XD
Sjhina chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Lovely~! Funny as well and cute xDD
UninhabitedUninhibited chapter 13 . 10/23/2007
er... why does hao always sit in a tree? is he a monkey? oh! hey that rhymed! hahahhah XD
sehifona chapter 14 . 7/24/2007
Hahah I like it alot, you are way better than I am. Please read my story and review as well okay. My story is called Shaman Queen Spirits Power Up! From Yuki Tsuyami, thats me!

Morty: I hope Yuki-sama won't turn out crazy than you are!

Me: Shut up Morty!

Morty: Well is true though, please read our story and find out that is true!

Me: Please don't listen to him okay, just do the good job!

Morty -roll his eye-: Whatever!

Me: Oh one more thing, can I add you to my favorite plz?

Morty: Than go!

Me: I didn't talking to you! I'm talking to author! Anyway thanks for let me add you to my fav.
Sakura no Umi chapter 14 . 5/7/2007
I'm pretty sure you heard this a lot really good story but bad grammer. I'm confused though in chapter 2 you said Hao and Yoh look a lot alike, but how can they if they're not brother's in this story? Well anyway keep up the good work.

~Sakura no Umi~
bailute chapter 14 . 2/13/2007
this story is great you make awesome story's
kaze yuki chapter 14 . 10/6/2006
wow. it is a great ending. yoh and anna are finally together with each other. i love it so much.
asakura4ever chapter 7 . 6/14/2006
goodas continue plz... oh btw some lines don make sense p
raven02 chapter 14 . 3/7/2006
Yay that's terrific! the best! keep it up!
Mrs Asakura Hao chapter 14 . 2/10/2006
Ah! U. MUST. MAKE. A. SEQUEL! N it must be bout Hao this time round!
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