Reviews for Takers Girls
soulsister chapter 13 . 10/3/2014
Please update this story so I can find out if Shannon and Ashley finally get together. They both finally deserve to be happy and apparently being together makes them happy.
Kristl chapter 13 . 8/25/2009
Great story I'd love to read more.
The St. John Lady chapter 1 . 3/3/2008
Damn it...

You made me cry!

I was sitting reading this in the middle of my local libaray in floods of tears!

The assistant had to hand me some tissues!

Anyways, amazingly well written.

I will (when I get some more tissues) read the rest of this...

But I just wanted to say how much i loved this story.
lady-kay-fallen-angel chapter 13 . 2/3/2008
i love this story it is so SWEET
BlackWingedAngel1991 chapter 13 . 10/16/2007
I've read this story probally twice already and still love it.
shannygoat chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
This is pretty good. It's a little hard to read because everything is single spaced, so please forgive me if I'm slow to reply. I like the story and I like Undertaker as a father figure...interesting
Hazel chapter 13 . 1/5/2007
Ok, So i know this story is old but I finally decided to read it and i really loved it! I thought it was great! exciting, and gong thru all the emotions that Ash felt and Shan never giving up it was just great! lol
I'm Miss World chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
I'm in love. This story is awesome. I know you haven't updated in a While, but please do!
dragonfly-maiden chapter 13 . 7/22/2006
That was such a good story!
sierra-raine chapter 13 . 4/7/2005
You have got to update this, Awesome is all i can say I could not stop reading till i got to the last chapter you had posted. Great job keep it up.
Crys-Spirit chapter 13 . 2/17/2005
Wow. All I can say is what a beautiful & touching story.
Latisha C chapter 12 . 2/16/2005
Good chapter. Though I was wondering when did the mother die? And why does this read chapter 13, when on the http address it says 12?
Latisha C chapter 11 . 2/16/2005
Sweet chapter.
Latisha C chapter 10 . 2/13/2005
Hm, good chapter. Now throughout the story I noticed that you are inconsistent with sentence structure. Perhaps it'd be a bit more clearer if, you were start a new lin each time a new person speaks. If you do that I guanrantee it'll be a lot clear and not to mention easy on the eyes.
Latisha C chapter 9 . 2/13/2005
Great chapter, Chica.

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