Reviews for A Name Conveyed
kaltagkiwi chapter 13 . 8/8/2008
This is the BEST story I have read so far on this site. Great plot, nice character portrayal...and thank you for including Gwydion! The poor guy doesn't get nearly enough attention.
Chaos Dragon chapter 13 . 3/19/2008
enjoyed it very much.

~cd
Chaos Dragon chapter 1 . 3/19/2008
i'll admit i was very afraid when i first opened this to read. i've tried a handful of the others offered for this category and found myself disappointed more than pleased. but this, this has made me take the time to review the first chapter before continuing on. thus far i am pleased. you've struck an excellent tone that's reminscient of elizabeth haydon's, and it's very enjoyable. heading to next chapter.

~cd
Lady Ariez chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
AH! I LOVE IT! GO ACHMED! I never did like Ashe espically when we found out he was Sam... that just made me mad...
Daenerys Malfoy chapter 2 . 12/26/2006
Very interesting! D
Eternity's Sapphire Edawn chapter 13 . 10/1/2006
(clapping)Bravo!Bravo! Wonderful story. You did an excellent job with this. Each chapter wasn't overdone so that it grew boring. It was just right in the sense that characters views switched and showed there feelings. Very incitive! Once more bravo to you. Keep up the good work.

Au voir,

Eve
Blazville chapter 13 . 7/27/2006
Excellent job! Onto the sequel with me!
blazville chapter 4 . 7/26/2006
Im still very much enjoying your story but I do have one complaint: Duke Gwyndion speaks much too informally. If his speech patterns mirrored say, Achmed's or Rhapsody's more closely, it would be a great improvement.
Blazville chapter 3 . 7/26/2006
So far Im very impressed wit this story. You've done an amazing job with the details involving Achmed's relationship with Rhapsody and his dislike for Ashe. One thing I noticed while I was reading though: “I’ll explain more once we leave. As for where we are going, best I can figure they are headed for the port in Avanderre" I believe it is spelled Avonderre. Otherwise excellent job. I am going to continue reading!
x.Janele.x chapter 13 . 6/3/2005
Ok, I enjoyed this story as I enjoy most Achmed/Rhapsody fics, but this could have used a lot more work. Just some constructive critism for you, mk? First: Add more detail! You don't have to rush through it and bypass everything! Take your time and descirbe everything, no amount of detail is too much. Second: Longer chapters! I read this whole fic in less than a half hour. I love long fics that keep me reading for hours. Third: Your characters are too OOC (out-of-character). Try to keep them more in-tune with their book counterparts. Thats all for now.
Roses All Over chapter 13 . 5/8/2005
YAY, thow I was hoping to read some more on Rhapsody and Achmed...AWSOME story Very good Job!

~Ever Rin~
Roses All Over chapter 12 . 5/8/2005
/cries the hard part... poor Rhapsody...

~Ever Rin~
Roses All Over chapter 11 . 5/8/2005
hm plots unfold Keep up the good work!

~Ever Rin~
Roses All Over chapter 10 . 5/8/2005
She should be a bit...nicer... me thinks

~Ever Rin~
Roses All Over chapter 9 . 5/8/2005
YAY! There going to rescue Rhapsody I hope...

~Ever Rin~
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